i wished ronald kiss helga with all his heart-just as she did..could he have just kept himself from thinking a lot and wait for the climax?anyway, if he wouldn't have pondered so much about so much, this story couldn't have been possible. )

this is kinda cute !

I liked it

Good job! This episode is one of my favorites and you did a great job portraying what Arnold might be thinking in anticipation of the kiss, and then during and after. And he noticed what a talented and passionate actress she is - I really think he would have picked right up on that!

I hope to read more from you soon.

Greetings Frannie!

This was a very great story and a marvelous read. It could very well be how Arnold thought of things, though the time did seem to draw out huh? LOL! Well it does when you think to yourself like that.

Marvelous job! Keep up the good work, oh and if you have time, be sure to read and review all of my fanfics and give me your honest opinions.

May The Force Be With You! -Your Pal, DarthRoden (aka Carl)

Really, I want so much to cheer and clap right now that it is scary!

A masterpiece. The Romeo and Juliet's episode centered mainly in Helga, so we all know how she felt, but how about Arnold? He concentrated so much in learning his role, we didn't saw how he was feeling about kissing Helga, and you showed it greatly.

Keep the good writing.

Wow...just wow. That's all I can say. Awesome job on this one. It's your best so far!