| Reviews for The Legend of Zelda: The Missing Piece |
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o.o chapter 1 . 9/7/2012 :D oh my gosh, I really hope you start writing again soon Senei, this story is incredible, and the rest of your readers seem to think so too! |
IDIOTwithTOOmuchTIME chapter 1 . 12/8/2007 I am sorry Space Writer, but I MUST diss you. You see... I admire your spirit on requests, however if you haven't noticed "the Missing Piece" is within the Ocarina of Time generation. The Minish Cap has no play within this story nor does the Picori Blade. The Picori Blade is the Four Sword and it doesn't show up here (except a refrence or two). Buddy, you can't just tell people what to write. UPDATES, on the other hand, are a MUST because I WANT THIS FANFIC TO MOVE ON! On with the story... Remember dude, don't tell people what to write. Instead, just sit back, enjoy the material, and if you haven't already, favorite this fic and pester the authors to write more. C'MON DARK! I WANT TO SEE WHAT'S NEXT! |
Space Writer chapter 1 . 8/18/2007 Wonderful! But if you were to add Skull Kid, Termina and a new undiscover land then it would be Readers Galore! Perhaps you can add the Picori. Let the Picori fuse the Picori Sword with the Kokiri Sword, now the Gilded Sword. Then upgrade it to The Shredder Sword or maybe you can make it into or maybe it can be the just the New Repeller of Evil, the all the Master Sword. One the won't suck you back in time. |
IDIOTwithTOOmuchTIME chapter 41 . 7/20/2007 HURRAY! I finaly got a FanFiction! Had to change my SN but other than that I get to add stories to my favourites. This is the first one to fav. Lucky you, crazy couple! Look out for my stories too! "I am useless to the world with an imagination I can't use..." -DarkMaster2101 Nonsense was beginning |
DarkMaster2101 chapter 41 . 6/13/2007 The part where Link strokes through Shiek's hair is missing one minor detail: SLAPP! But that's just me... I've illustrated this story with so many pictures on hand. Hey! Could someone send me a scanner and a good PC with Flash DX 2004 or higher? PSYCH! Just kiddin' around... Anyways, keep it up. Short chapters in this fic are scenes to me and the first part is like a 2 & 1/2 hour animated movie. Pray for Nintendo not steal your ideas like they did every Pokémon fans, LEAFEON WAS MINE! PSYCH AGAIN! Love your untold legend! |
DarkMaster2101 chapter 40 . 6/13/2007 Zelda's NOT Link's type because in the future, they reincarnate into relative. lol Keep it up! I'VE WAITED OVER HALF A YEAR FOR THIS MOMENT, CURSES! |
ZombieDragon chapter 41 . 6/13/2007 Wow, I just found this story now...so i'm gonna review it from here on! (Arn't I cool?) But yeah, i've noticed you spoke french...and i'm Canadians so I was wondering if you were too cause you said, 'eh' in a couple of author notes... Anyway, awesome story! I really can't wait for the next update! Please, update soon! *story alerted* |
xx.Dark.Demonic.Angel.xx chapter 39 . 5/21/2007 update please:D |
DarkMaster2101 chapter 39 . 1/27/2007 I hope I am not hurting your feelings, but I'm laying off your fiction for 3-6 months now. I'm giving you time to draft, finish school, revision time, and I am TOO FREAKIN' ADDICTED TO YOUR STORY (*sniff* *sniff* it's so good...)! I need to lay off for my mind is starting to mix your fic with my version (I fear copyright laws), so you can contact me about my other fics but it might take me more than 5 months to 2 years before I can post (I can't use DarkMaster2101, someone stole my name so search for my e-mail instead). That goes for you too reviewers, but I'll probably NOT do Zelda but instead somethin else like Kingdom Hearts, Fire Emblem, or just plain parodic cross-overs like another Captain-N, called the League of Gamers (ex. Tsubasa Chronicles and Dynasty Warriors, yipee Lu Bu slashes Syaron). I'll review in 6 months Hikaru Dark and Yomi Shoiken. You two alone seem like a perfect star for an Animé by yourselves. Amazin' the people you find! |
Lee Totema chapter 29 . 1/21/2007 Ne, Ne! When are you going to release the part 2? |
DarkMaster2101 chapter 1 . 1/20/2007 I hope that all of the tips I've given you on your fic will help you in the future. Also, I just want you to know... If you do get a writer's block you can allways contact me. I'll try to allways be there to support you anyway I can write to you. To other reviewers. I TOLD YOU SO! The Master Sword returns to purge the hearts of evil! I need to start scribing manuscripts and illustrate pictures of Animémerica (Animé style cartoons) and... Oh Crap! I gotta get started on my project for the "Technical Sales Event" for DECA! Wish me luck for reaching Nationals. |
Thawn716 chapter 39 . 1/20/2007 Bugger I was expecting to click the next chapter then I see end of part 1. Now I'm sad. |
DarkMaster2101 chapter 37 . 1/9/2007 I've tried to e-mail you but Chii will not let me type (software keyboard's more like point and click) more than 10 freakin' scentences w/o FREAKING FREAZING. So now my reviews are short... *sigh* Well did you know on the official Legend of Zelda website chronological says Ocarina of Time is the very first battle between Link and the King of Evil, Gannondorf. Wind Waker was next, then Zelda II, A Link to the Past, Link's Awakening, 1st LoZ, back to II, the Dic cartoon series, then Oracles, and last and most current LoZ was Four Swords. Twilight Princess would prob. be between OoT WW, or Oracles and Four Swords. I'm tryin' to make an LoZ fanfic after Fourswords to bring Hyrule into contact with the outside worlds (Fire Emblem, Feudal Japan, D&D and more). At least five kingdoms. |
Goddess Jeshi chapter 1 . 1/5/2007 A bit of an odd ending, but good none the less. I'm a little confused, but I'm guessing that's part of the plot. Now I've gotta go read the next chapter - good story! |
Thawn716 chapter 37 . 1/4/2007 Excellent another chapter. I have always agreed with the belief that link hated the whole Hero thing unlike some people who think that going forward seven years then having everything that you accomplished taken away would be "fun". |