This story was amazing!

This was a cute story, though the sudden changing of scenes without anything to indicate it was happening was a little disorienting.

Also, I can’t remember if I reviewed the prequel, but I obviously liked it enough to move on to the sequel.

I loved these stories

Fantastic story!
Love it soooooo much!
L

Bravo,what a story.I thank you for sharing it. Look forward to more from you. Thank you.

Nice good

Great

This harry is a fucking bitch
All that training in the past
Now he's being pushed around like nothing
Plus hermoine being all shitty bout the god forsaken beans

Excellent story. Thanks.
Blueberry Babe

Good story. Needs more editing though.

You do know that "were" doesn't have any "h"s, don't you?

Cringe! "knighting gown" for "nightgown"? No, McGonagall does not invest people with knighthood before breakfast.

Draco got what he deserved, and right under Snape's nose. Yeah!

The following paragraph is formatted very inappropriately:

"As no doubt many of you." Snape looked in Malfoy's direction. "Know that the dementors of Azakaban have left their posts and have joined the dark lord."

It should look more like this:

"As no doubt many of you know," Snape looked in Malfoy's direction, "the Dementors of Azkaban have left their posts and have joined the Dark Lord."

Gah! "wonder" (to cogitate in curiosity and awe) doesn't have any "a"s in it. Conversely, "wander" (to stray from a straight path) doesn't have any "o"s, and the two words don't mean the same thing at all and should never, ever be confused for each other. To do so repeatedly is fingernails-on-blackboard irritating.

I think I would have answered Dumbledore, "I'd rather not have people talking about my behind my back where I cannot defend myself, especially when they want to make decisions that affect me without asking me what I want." It's really unspeakably rude to ask someone to leave so you can talk about them and make decisions without their input.