Reviews for Fallen
C.S. Augustoni chapter 20 . 12/1/2017
A great read to come back to again and again !
Tsumujikaze Yumi chapter 20 . 1/5/2016
That was really good ! XD
Merci beaucoup haha
AI chapter 20 . 6/21/2015
Interesting story! Thanks for writing!
bestlemongreen chapter 20 . 4/24/2010
I finally finished !

You're the first Star Wars-fanfiction author who replied my review,I'm glad .

In many parts of the story, Anakin was so clingy...like a baby Koala bear...Hmm,that sounds cute!

I really like our story,in the movie it was such a heartbreaking ending and I'm happy that your fiction didn't have sad ending._
bestlemongreen chapter 8 . 4/23/2010
Oh! This is just what I always want,I really love Obi-Wan with padawan hair-style and no beard because it made him look so young(not that I don't like normal him!) This is the first fiction I found him like that(within Master status).

And their first time,I'm happy that Anakin was still padawan.

Very good description and very,very nice plot.
MsKhleom chapter 20 . 2/5/2010
Beautiful story thanks
W i t h o u t.A.S o u n d chapter 6 . 7/1/2009
It is a very nice story so far, but I'm afriad there is a crucial part you are missing. The royal gaurds, the ones in red, they are sworn in to a life of silence. They are not to speak to anyone, or they will be killed, or taken out of the position. If you didn't know, now you do, if you did but forgot, you shouldn't have.

-The Mad Arrow)
Barranca chapter 20 . 6/11/2007
I cannot imagine a more insecure person than Anakin, he's lucky to have Obi-Wan there for him :) All's well that ends well. I wonder how Padme reacted at the news of Anakin's and Obi-Wan's relationship.
LightSaber101 chapter 20 . 9/27/2006
This story was really good. I enjoyed it on meny levels. I hope to see meny more stories like this from you. I love Anakin torture. Palpatine would have tortured Anakin in any way to get him to turn if he would have not turned that night. Anakin would have suffered. Anyway I love the story. Please write another one like this soon.
Phoenix Red Lion chapter 20 . 4/19/2006
Wonderful...absolutely wonderful! I've been hooked on this fic and I'm so HAPPY that they are able to be together. Now how Padme will handle this is another story...but great job! And I love how Anakin took care of Sidious...NICE! And poor Obi-wan...losing his arm. Though he is right...a lost arm is better than losing Anakin.

Loved the sap in this story! That is my favorite! Great job!
ShadowLea chapter 20 . 4/19/2006
nice chapter :D very nice
Adrianna chapter 20 . 4/19/2006
I absolutely love your story! Great chapter! I hope there is more, but if not...I am happy they ended up together! Can't wait to read more of your work!
MMM73181 chapter 20 . 4/19/2006
yeah an update i was just thinking yesterday that you would be due for an update right about today i was gonna joke and say hey great chap of fallen whens the next wcu to see if i could get another chap of there next. LOL

anyway looking forward to reading this at work and commenting at forcehaven and especially an update of WCU

updating at group

Snow
Lincoln Six Echo chapter 20 . 4/19/2006
Ah...wonderful, wonderful end. I am sorry that Obi-Wan lost his arm, but it is nothing compared to losing his life.

You know, I had the feeling one of them might not survive the battle with Sidious, thus I shamelessly scrolled down to the end to check if they were still alive before starting reading. That's was the only reason I did not scream when Anakin fell down the window with Sidious.

It is a terrific scene and I loved how Anakin told "I love you" to Obi-Wan before jumping. He was ready to die for his lover and it is so beautifully romantic. *sigh*

Well done, I loved this story.

Lincoln Six Echo Aka Generale_Kenobi Aka Ilaria
Lea Devon chapter 19 . 3/18/2006
I love the way you write their 'moments' together, it's so sweet and adorable but still in character. I look forward to the fight - hope they kick ass.
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