| Reviews for I Do |
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Guest chapter 14 . 6/10 Im so confused! |
SomebodyLost chapter 17 . 7/7/2019 While it was fun at first, I simply got tired when more harem hijinks occurred. Or the black rape comedy on men. Eh, the women just blurred altogether to be one angry creature while the guys all just became whimpering 'poor' sods. They kinda lost their charm, I think. Mixing anything with the Ranma verse tends to make anything devolve into chaos, so I kinda expected chaos, but it turns out I grew tired of that chaos. I'm aware it's a personal preference, but I think bringing the Ranma aspects full force ain't good. But thanks for writing. It's a shame though that this isn't finished; even though I don't like all of it, it was still entertaining. |
Dragonjek chapter 17 . 8/29/2018 Fortunately, repeat exposure should eventually allow Shinji and his berserker self to unite, allowing him to remember sex. I'm personally not too big on the Ranma aspects added into it, though. The references were fine, and even a brief visit from family would have been alright, but it seems like recently at least half of the focus of the story is reorienting to be about the Ranma parts. Could you at change the story category to a crossover with Ranma, or at least mention in the description that it has aspects of Ranma 1/2? If you enter the story expecting something like that it's alright, but having a character from another series suddenly appear and start hogging face time is sort of unpleasant if you came expecting just to read an Eva fic. |
Nihatclodra chapter 16 . 8/19/2017 Wait, i just checked; HOLY SHIT YOU'VE BEEN UPDATING! THERE'S ACTUAL HOPE! |
Nihatclodra chapter 17 . 8/19/2017 This... was hilarious. If only you didn't abandon fanfiction entirely... |
Guest chapter 17 . 5/8/2017 11 years... could you update this? Pretty please with a cherries on top? |
Guest chapter 12 . 5/7/2017 I dont know why but I can't help but crack a smile |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 1 . 12/2/2016 "Ms. Langley, one more interruption from you, and I will assign you a thirty page paper on the differences between Gundam series from Pre-Second Impact as compared to Post Second Impact." Kensuke adjusted his glasses. "Those were the best two weeks I ever spent in this class." Now there's a Japanese kid who knows how to act like he's around giant robots. "Somewhere, Gendo Ikari felt the sudden need to make his son miserable both grow and diminish, resigning to take the confusion out on the nameless tech who was about to fall into the EVA's LCL bath." Hah! "Tough, the decision is final. And Ms. Langley, I want another ten page paper on the differences between American cartoons along the same vein as the Gundam paper, thanks to your outburst." That one shouldn't be too bad, since chicks DO dig giant robots after all. "One of the pre-second-impact publications I studied claimed that boring, or the complete lack of, sex was one of the most common causes for failed relationships" Well, the idiots have it in reverse. Correlation is not causation. |
Viper5delta chapter 6 . 6/22/2016 Seems like an interesting, but I can't get over all of the omakes :( |
COBRASTEVE chapter 4 . 2/5/2016 You are indeed THE master storyteller to mix an NGE story with such comedy. Only on CH 4 but...wow! |
HonorGuard Ra chapter 17 . 11/12/2015 What could possibly go wrong? This story being dead/complete since '06 is a good start. |
Red Death chapter 3 . 9/2/2015 Very amusing and gigglicious thus far, but this story has committed one of the cardinal sins of online fanfiction: Easily more than half of every chapter are omakes. This is not only bad form for any writer, as any non-story-related material is to be kept to an absolute minimum, it's above and beyond FFNet's rules. This story would be immediately deleted on sight if the admins got a report. Aside from this egregious error, the story is highly amusing. I can't stop laughing! |
Guest chapter 17 . 11/30/2014 why did you stop |
Fox Boss chapter 17 . 8/6/2014 Can't wait for Mari to appear. |
Steven chapter 17 . 5/4/2014 WHY DID YOU NEVER CONTINUE THIS! |