It was going great until the tragedy... man, please lable 'tragedy' on the genre, cuz this is sad

You...you killed my heart :'c
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As sad as this was, I loved it a lot..

I've read this story at least three times and even though I know the ending is coming, I still can't help but to cry. All your stories are amazing and I really wish you had kept writing! Thamk you for what you have written and you are an awesome writer!

Beautiful story, you're a good writer :)... But why? WHY? Such a sad ending... * crying * anyway good work ;)

CRYING NOW

*Cries*
I loved this story and the sad ending!

I love this story! Great work.

I hate you… *wipes tears away*

I love the fic! It's awesome, slightly fast paced, but still awesome.

I bawled… *cuddles tear stained pillow*

Keep doing awesomeness! haha

~ Adrii

oh God.. thats so sad... im stil lshivering as i write this... it made me cry... but it was so amazing i woudl read it 10X over

god, this is the second fanfiction tonight i teared up on. thank you so much, but no thanks. hehhehe

damn you.. **wipes a tear away** ;_; I loved this fic, but i hated the ending. not really.. GAH! stupid murdoc! *bashes* _

Hey again.

I wish I hadn't read this it was so sad well actually no because it is a brilliant st! Argh I think I've lost 20 pounds from crying out all the water in my body [okay I don't know if that happens lol] but that was really sad! You are a good writer though! But sheesh I have a headache from crying so much I think you should issue a warning to emotional maniacs such as myself. XD

Anyway I'll stop rambling it was a good story I think you did well with dealing with Murdoc's emotions as toughies have feelings too!

aww..this so sad and emotional. I like it though! m..will russ and noodle get together?

This story is really good, it could make one hekuva movie #_

I think this one has been too much sad, the ending is too fast, everything happens in some few lines. Sincerely, after reading your other fic (longer, more passionate) I think this is not as good.

Anyway, I must say it's pretty well writen, that's for sure. A little bit 'out of character' stuff, but it is very normal since the situation you write is different from the original plot of Gorillas

I don't like the ending, but the rest of it is cool, maybe too fast though. Have you think about the possibility of writing a second ending? It is, something little bit longer and maybe without a so dramatical events. Think of it: an alternative ending could be also a challenge and you'd do happy lot of people, me included