Why do I always find good stories that are unfinished. It was getting good :/
Please update, I know it's been years but please?

I love it the whole thing i usually am kind of picky u could say about Danny phantom ff but this one is one of the best i know this was written about 8yrs. ago but ic u will please write more like what will happen next if u do that would mean alot. If u want to e-mail me its : thank you :)

plz continue this! i luuuv this fic sooo much!

im so confused. what is going on with Danny? are there 2 different worlds going on in this? the one where hes locked up and the one where he really sick? or are they one in the same? maybe itll all make more sense later on. update soon _ Ja.

...such a shame that this was never continued. This is pretty good!

Wow! This is getting better and better. It is great! I hope that you can update and finish it soon. This is too good for you to stop and loose interest now.

This is a good chapter of the story! This is getting good! Keep at it and I hope that you will contiune to update

This is a good chapter of the story! This is getting good! Keep at it and I hope that you will contiune to update!

This is a good chapter of the story and I hope that you will contiune to update soon!

Wow, this is a good story! Keep it comming!

awsome just great but pleaz the revamping is so confusing and my brain right now is not functioning right. anywayz it was schay enjoy typin' it. 'cuz I likz it. lol XDXDXDX

Yay! This fic is a lot of fun, I really can't wait to see what happens! I don't care if it is pompous pep or swagger bishie! (Personally I think that you should totally make it a pompous pep right now, then when you introduce Dash -whom Danny has "never met" before- to start up a little something between them while having the pompous pep still going. Then gradually switch over to Danny actually being emotionally attached to Dash, but still being with Vlad and then have him start to pull away to be all with Dash completely...but hey, I jusy love that kind of conflict, and your if-y-ness in deciding tempted me into talking.) Anyway, your writing style I like very much. You take everything at a very nice pace, and I think the information that you are slowly feeding the we the readers is perfect. . Some of the areas where you are trying to change the words for effect is a little ify. You make some sections seem strained into sounding cool -like at the blue eyes part- but it doesn't really sound cool, it clashes with your other style and makes it sound kind of stiff...so ya, if you could try to make it a little less choppy at those kinda of parts I think that it would compliment your story greatly to do so. Anyway, other than that I think that this is simply wonderful. I really hope to see more soon!

~DC

I'm really into this but don't worry I procraste too.

I love the Box Ghost... *sighs dreamily* Now THERE'S a man who knows what he wants from (un)life! So dedicated! So proud! Okay, so I only like the way he talks... He has amazing enunciation.

I look forward to hopefully reading more of this soon! *bows politely* Thankyou.