Good start. I hope to read more. Your dialogue is good. You write in paragraphs, you have great descriptions.

Reading this brought me relief, that there are still Ginny/Voldy writers out there who can actually write.

oh, please update soon!i cant wait to read more of this!it seems so wicked!

~Amanda~

Aww...too short. You need to make the chapters longer. That'd get more people interested. But i liked the chapter nonetheless. You are very good at describing surroundings and the like. Keep it up and udate soon!

Lolly.._

Wonderfully written. The mysterious way in which you begun the story was very cleverly done. I can't wait to read the next chapter...

Oh wow, this sounds very good! I'm eager to find out who the descendants are. Keep up the good work please! :)

hey...this is a great beginning...But youve posted twoo chapters and we dont know much...plz...dont make us hang anymore...on the other hand...your story is nicely written...i mean that you know how to write so that the reader can actually see the angst or darkness. Well I hope that you update soon and good work... :o)

okay i have to say this is a nice begginging and that it is sorta a unquie and creative idea for a story and so all i have to say now is to not be like other ppl and update superfast