wish this was how that episode would've gone

love the banter and their general cuteness

Late reader because just started watching the show a couple weeks ago. AMAZING work! Best I have read so far. Keep going.

That was beautiful...I could so see this happening after that scene (which btw is my absolute fav lit/jess moment!). Thank you for this!

God I wish… That would have been perfect, it was perfect. I just wish that… well you know. Great job.

Absolute favorite part:

“Hey Rory?”

“Hmm?”

“I love you.”

“I love you too,” she whispered while she snuggled further into him. He sighed and closed his eyes, wrapping his arms tightly around her.

“And I don’t wanna die,” he added after a moment. She burst out laughing as she sat up then.

Ah, so sweet and then so funny. I love it to death. :)

Ah, the true way the Jess/Rory saga should have ended...with them together! Wonderful story...an absolute favorite!

Loved it! Definitley one of my favorite Lit oneshots.

so good! that wouldve totally fit in the show ahh i love it

omg, so good! everyone was def in charater and i loved the banter, and the fluffyness and just EVERYTHING! if u write a squeal i'll b ur best friend...lol. but really, squeal!

here leaving you another one of your favorite meal.

i liked this story in all its cheesiness because i really wish something similar happened in the show. Jess was supposed to be her first... and her last now that i think of it ;) this is why i love fanfiction so much :) thank you for this cute little story. i'd loved to read the conversation that took place between the Gilmore girls, the morning after lol

I definitaly enjoyed!

Loved it- sweet, and true to the tempo of the show. Keep writing.

I loved it, and I wish you would write a sequel!

Love it completely.

good!