Reviews for Cry of a Wolf
Guest chapter 2 . 10/24/2018
I think thus far you have several misconceptions about Chinese culture that I think would be worth going back to make amendments on. While if there are manga translations or anime subtitles we’d read the Chinese pronunciations of their kanji, we’d generally call a Japanese person by their normal name. (Plus Ying Fa is FAR too literal—her translated name in the dub is “Siu Ying”, “Little Cherry.”) Furthermore, I’m confused as to why Syaoran calls his father by the Japanese title and he has a Japanese name. (Kyo is not a Mandarin or Cantonese name as far as I’m concerned.) This isn’t to discourage you from writing at all, but I do believe researching a culture better or talking to a person from that culture would benefit the believability of your characters much more.
Amy chapter 47 . 7/26/2018
Wow. I have so much fun reading this! Always love to see protective Syaoran and Sakura, they are born for each other3 The last ‘HOPE’ card being used, it’s like as if I’m watching the last sealed card— the excitement and anticipation! Thanks for completing this powerful fanfic, it’s amazing!
NollasBlack chapter 47 . 8/2/2016
Hello! How are you?

I finished this in three days... I could have ended it early but school.
It was truly amazing, I like the story behind the curse, the brothers and balance. It was really interesting and well written. Everything made sense. No loop holes. Some minor details left untouched like Tomoyo's probable magic power or who is that Fei Wong Reed...
It made me sad most of the last chapters, but because of the backstory of Shun and XianLan, although I would have like a bit more of involvement in Naruku in the backstory. You left him like a second party with no importance, and with all the problems he created I was expecting a more important role in the backstory.
I did not like that Sakura was almost helpless most of the fanfic and that she was again the lady in distress many times. She has power, she should be able to fend by herself for awhile.
I think it touches are really hard topic. Grief. Grief can be a really difficult period in someone's life and sometimes in marks the person's life.

Congratulations on your fanfic, it was incredible entertaining.
NollasBlack
Sparklingem91 chapter 47 . 12/6/2015
This whole story was amazing! I look forward to reading other fanfics from you, particularly the new idea that you have! Hope to see more from you soon!
sme1228 chapter 47 . 11/25/2015
love it
jenniilex3 chapter 47 . 9/23/2015
Uwaah talk about an emotional roller coaster! This was an amazing story! I'm so glad I managed to find it :)

The plot and storyline are all so wonderfully written up. It was so easy to follow... not to mention so emotionally thrilling with all the action and the drama. OMG. Damn that Naraku ... although he reminded me of another Naraku I know of ... hmmm (hahahahhaha I'm teasing)

Another thing I loved was that I think you kept the characters's personalities well in tact as well! Syaoran with his serious quirkiness; Tomoyo & Eriol with their schemes; Sakura with her (kinda) oblivious at times self; Touya with his over protectiveness. HAHA.

Absolutely LOVED Kohaku 3 So cute! I KNEW THERE WAS SOMETHING UP WITH THOSE BODYGUARD GIRLS! EVIL! _

Finished this all in a day and now I'm so sad. Like what am I supposed to read now? /3
TY FOR WRITING THIS
AngelEmCuti chapter 47 . 9/15/2015
A wonderful end to a wonderful story!
Warmach1ne32 chapter 47 . 9/3/2015
I will admit, this story have my eyes misted a few times so I say this is well done. I am looking forward to more from you but I should warn you that certain events shouldn't feel a bit... I don't know how to say it.. ehh feel forced? or something similar. This is Cardcaptor Sakura and it has a unique feel too it and if the feel of it changed then that wouldn't be good since we watched CS because it has that feel. If it change into something unfamiliar and changed too much that it has a totally different feel to it then it wouldn't feel like a CS story we know and that might turn people off. If it change for the better then good but if it isn't then a few might not read it.

I can't explain it well but I hope you know what I'm typing about. Why, when you watch other magic girl anime it doesn't feel the same as CS? that is what I'm typing about, I have read alot of stories that doesn't feel like CS and that turned me off quickly. I'm not mad at you or saying you shouldn't do dark themes, I'm just warning and maybe give some advice so your story doesn't feel too different. If I can help make your story better by making a review and advice then I am happy because I could read a better story than before. Thank you for making Cry of the Wolf I really enjoy it and Good Luck in Writing.
Suzu the Black Cat chapter 5 . 6/11/2015
Kohaka from spirited away
Gadget boy chapter 46 . 10/2/2014
Great job as always. Just a suggestion, once this whole crisis with syaoran is over, maybe you can write them staying together. Either having sakura stay in china or syaoran moving to japan seems to be a good idea to me. But your the one who decides that. And if possible, maybe you can make a sequel of this story that focus not only to Sakura and Syaoran but to Tomoyo and Eriol too since they only became a couple when eriol was poisoned in one of your earlier chapters. Keep up the good work.
James Birdsong chapter 46 . 10/2/2014
Excellent or cool.
Gadget boy chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
I just finished reading all your chapter and I think it's a great work. I took a look and I saw that this is the only one left in your stories that still not finished. So I hope you update soon.
Gadget boy chapter 45 . 9/27/2014
This fanfic is really amazing. The story is really well done so I do hope you finish. Please do finish it.
lynda olivier chapter 45 . 6/14/2014
this is fantastic fiction
I love it
puts the next chapter
lhaine07 chapter 45 . 6/11/2014
I am so glad to see this update. It is been a long time. I wish syaoran is okay. I glad we have the history what happened in the past. I hope i will again see another update before the year ends. :)
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