| Reviews for New Moon Rising revisited |
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Rain Addict CM chapter 4 . 2/16/2011 Good story. I'm just a bit sad there Isn't more. |
LEDlorien7 chapter 4 . 7/7/2008 Wow, I love that Oz isn't sorry he bit her. That was surprise, and then I was like no, you're right. Cool. Haha, I love all the suggestions about what Tara and Oz are doing. I knew someone would say they were mating, so of course it had to be Anya. Wow, I love the that's what the wolf is feeling, not Tara. Brilliant. Ack, but Tara does not want to mate. That's the wolf, right? Please? OK, good. I like the possibility of friendship with Tara and Oz. I like this. I hope you continue it. |
LEDlorien7 chapter 3 . 7/7/2008 This is an extremely brilliant line: "not really sounding annoyed, but putting up a valiant attempt at it. It was too early for him to feel much more then exhausted. Maybe the aggravation would set in once he finished his first cup of tea." Whoa, whoa. Awesome. You're moving way up on my approval scale, lol. I'm loving this! |
LEDlorien7 chapter 2 . 7/7/2008 OK, first thing: I only ever comment on grammar when I think a story is good. Really, I'm not kidding. Anyway, this sentence: "As soon as she had closed the door, she had tripped her way across her room and into her comfy chair, falling into it head first." Is a little weird. I'd take out the "had" maybe. I think that would fix it. Ooh, exciting. I like the cliffie too. AH, loving this! |
LEDlorien7 chapter 1 . 7/7/2008 Hmm, so far so good... I want to see you move away from the episode into your own stuff... like, I know all the dialogue from the episode, so I want to see your dialogue. But good concept so far. I'll keep reading. |
FeralDemonArtemis3.0 chapter 4 . 1/4/2007 Wow I never thought if something like this happened please update soon I can't wait to see what happens next. |
Sam chapter 4 . 9/29/2006 It's wonderful.. update plz... cant wait for more... :) |
Genic chapter 4 . 9/6/2006 hay interesting plot. i like it. cant wait for the next chap. good work read ya later |
Kalacyn chapter 3 . 2/17/2006 Excellent! Update! Please! I'm dying from anticipation! |
119 chapter 3 . 12/23/2005 update. please *down on knees begging* |
Yaten Driretlan The Wicked chapter 3 . 8/17/2005 Hey pretty nice and good fic so far, I am liking it so I hope I can read more of it soon, I like the idea you are using on the fic so... go on, wish you luck and see ya later |
Billy Rose chapter 3 . 8/13/2005 i don't feel either way about oz, but i'm glad he's gonna help tara tara rocks and the bits about ripping people to bits is awesome :D can't wait for next chap |
Billy Rose chapter 1 . 8/13/2005 ...through the looking glass ROCKS! :D now that i got that out of the way, this is great so far can't wait to see how will reacts to tara's new development |
fufulupin chapter 3 . 8/11/2005 Aww, this is cute (and well-written, which is a plus). And I love that you didn't just send Oz off, cuz he's always a nifty character. |
fligurl chapter 3 . 8/3/2005 THats a really interesting twist that I have never heard of before. VEry original. Keep up the good work and Im looking forward to another update soon. |