I love this!

this is what played out in my mind about what happened at the end of this chap.

Inuyasha: You beat the crap out of both of them?

Makoto: yep.

Inuyasha: (pats son on the back) thats my boy mangy wolves.

We all know thats how Inuyasha would respond...Am i right :D

Are you going to update this soon? This is AWESOME!

Keh. Not so great. Not so bad. More Inukag required.

i had to read the first story i love it.

hehe I loved it, but I have a feeling their goinng to get back together he's just like inuyasha

aww he got one of his first love life lessons...lol...i think that akina is turning into a dirty lil tramp...but thats just me...if anyone agrees with that say I *lots of ppl raise hands and say I* i feel bad for makoto...what does makoto mean anyway?...just one more thing...whats with the random bolder words...lol...curiosity killed the cat but nothing said it killed the girl...lol

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wow like it update if there is any more here

*shoots people that flame you* stupid people dont know a good story when they read one...Awesomeness on the chappy!

uh-oh thats not good...hope theres not Makoto and Shippou stew for dinner...Awesome chapter!

awesomeness i read them sorry i didnt review though *smacks herself* ok well im making up for it now! good job!

hey this is good! i would read more but i g2g.

there are no words to express how much i love this series. i am in the prosses of writing one just like it it took me a week to finish the last one with my mom trying to pry me away from the computer. it didnt work too well. keep it up and i cant wait to read the sequil

so if this was published in jully that means that jully being sevent plus 1- means 17 minus 5 is january plus five for january that means march no wait january februrary march april may. Yeah so in may the sequel should be out? wow... TAHT'S IN 3 MILLION DAYS! ...snif... oh well! At least I'll be able to get on the band wagon from chapter 1... Just a question... no actually 2... first sry if i got u confused with my calculation. Okay so question 1 how old is Makoto in the fic (this one and sequel) and isnt akina one year and a half older than Makoto? Just curious. I hope i'm not off track... well then ciao for now... keep it up! Lol Miroku made me lagh so hard in this last chapter! I mean the whole threat for Mai's husband LOL! so Miroku like! And what happened with Shippo. Man that was like obvious it was going to happen some day lol!

again these were great chapters. i think it will be worth the wait for the sequel to come out. can't wait! ~ja ne(till then )

The one shots, as well as the original story is awesome! Write the sequel soon!