I really like your story, too bad you haven't finished it. It was about to get really good! I hope you are still writing, you're a good writer and tell a good story, Zendall or not.

Can't wait for the rest! I'll be waiting on the edge of my seat!

omg, i just read your story for a second time and loved it even more! update soon! we have to know what happens...lol

very well written, especially the chapters with Michael and Ethan

I can't wait to find out how Zach reacts when him and Michael come face to face.

I just found your story today.

So far it is very good and am looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters.

I do have one small suggestion however.

Add some commas & other punctuation. At times it is a bit difficultto read, and some of the sentences are just running on. Other wise I am enjoying it very much.

This was one of the best chapters yet. I loved how you made it where Kendall saw Michael and made everyone else think that she was crazy. I can't believe she passed out, I want to know what will happen when she wakes.

P.S. I read a lot of other Zendall fanfics and there are so many it is kinda getting confusing and hard for me to know the difference about whats going on in them. So when you post the next chapter, could you please tell me at the top of the page if Kendall is pregnant with Zack's baby in this chapter.

this story is very orignal i just love it please update soon

I love it and I am so glad that Kendall and Zack are together, they are so perfect for each other and so cute. Please hurry and POST MORE.

What? OMG. I love it. What a cliffhanger. You are so talented, have you thought of becoming a writer. Well anyways please just hurry and post again b/c this chapter was so good and I can't believe that you brought Michael back. And I can't wait to read the next chapter b/c I want to know whats going to happen next so bad. PLEASE POST MORE SOON.

Oh my gosh please hurry and post again I want to read more about Zack and Kendall's growing relationship and feelings for each other. I think that they are so cute together. I thought this chapter was great and I can't wait to read the next one.

This has to be the best chapter in the whole story. hope u post more soon

great story this is one of my favorit3 zendall stories please update soon

Thank you so much for posting I have been waiting for the next chapter of this story. I wish you would post more often. Well anyways, the chapter was great, I think you're doing a good job of building a relationship between Kendall and Zack. B/c you are showing how their relationship grows and hopefully it grows from friends to two people in love. PLEASE POST ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON. THANKS FOR BEING A GREAT AND INTERESTING WRITER.

Sweet and sexy yet sad. I love that Zach considered picking the lock, I think anyone else might have actually left.