wanna know somethign funny though? Beka is the mother of all Nietzschean's. So Tyr likes his great (continue this word 16 more times) grtanmother.

that was a sorry to say sickly sweet story

i think they admitted to love much to early

i didnt hate it

That was wonderful. It was sweet and romantic. Don't be afraid to go where your story takes you.

*l* sappy yes but it was still fun!

This is a very good story. I think you are aged 13 from your reviews. Breaking up the text a bit at the beginning would give more impact as you make some nice points and spacing would emphasise this. With songfic I'm always inclined to think yes the song fits I know the tune where is the rest of the story! But I think your song is very well chosen! Well done!

I don't care if they would have acted or not like that! I love the idea of Tyr and Beka together! More stories like that would be good.