That was really well done. I got a great feel for Sara's mom in this fic. Impressive work.

-Ellie

WOW. THIS WAS AWESOME.

That was so sad and happy all at the same time.

Lovely, charming piece. It was nice seeing the character interactions and I do believe that putting Laura Sidle in a fanfiction like this was very original.

I loved this: 'For Laura Sidle, who had never placed her hopes any higher than raw survival, it gave everything, every grey monotony and orange uniformity, a reason.'

It's great to see this fic end on a poetic and hopeful note :).

You wrote this a very long time ago. But, I thought I'd just tell you this is my all time favorite Warrick/Sara fic. You did a really great job with it.

Fabulous! I loved this one-shot. It was incredibly well-written.

Another wonderful W/S fic! You are a very talented writer, I must say. You have a very firm grasp on spelling and punctuation, which is always a plus. That, and you have the characters down pat.

Though we haven't yet seen what Warrick would be like as a father, I feel you've captured it perfectly! I loved the sweet relationship he had with Ella.

Can't wait to read another!

excellent i absouloutly love this story!

This is my second time reading this and I thought this would be so good if CSI would do something like this to put Sara's past and burdens to rest so she could be truly happy. Once again you out did yourself this is truly a wonderful story. Love Warrick with Ella.

JENNIFER

WARRICK/SARA SHIPPER

This is so excellent, I've read it over and over. It's one of the best WS fics I've read. Lovely characterization and emotions. Really enjoyed it

God, do you know how jealous I am right now? One day! One flipping day to write that masterpiece. I didn't find a single error, and I'm in AAP language arts! Sorry, didn't mean to brag there; that was a bit sultry. Lemonjelly, please, don't ever say that again. God, woman, if I could write something like this one day, I'd be running to a publisher! Good Lord... One cannot oblige as well as you, and one cannot improve perfection. Oh, it was so good, but, when I read the beginning I was thinking, "Uh, I think I know what they're doing, but it could be something different. Let's just say I didn't think it was what it turned out to be. Curse me and my pre-judging mind. Anyway, how do I put this in a way that will respect your great talent? Hm... Lemonjelly, the way you write, I believe it would make Shakespeare jealous. Really. Okay, well, I just had three cups of green tea, and now I really have to pee! I have no self-control when it comes to things like green tea, Lord help me. Anyway, wonderful job, and please keep writing the way you do. And I love the girl's name: Ella. Very nice. And the monsters, that was cute. Alright, I'm off!

This was really great, I loved it. It was an intense read, with a very funny scene about Warrick and the monsters in the closet :) Well done! More muffins for you!

This was such an excellent story. I really enjoyed it. I loved the whole thing. I really liked when Warrick was talking to the "monsters" in Ella's closet. You did a great job. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Excellent! Sara was right on. I loved how you had Warrick "talk" with the monsters. Very cute!

WOW! erm yer like wow, a really good piece capturing exactly what i'd expect from Sara in that situation. Gonna potter off and read all your other stories now.