Short but good :)

Well that certainly was diffrent :) I liked the description though it was rathersad at the end good job!

Ive never read this pairing before... but i like this ficlet!

This is really good, one of the best Lily/Lucius fics I've read I think (there are so few!). Hmm, 'concrit always appreciated' - does that mean you don't want praise? :D Well, in terms of concrit, I guess it could have been longer... Or you could have written a companion piece from Lily's POV (now that I would have liked to see)... But that's all I can think of. Really, it's great!

VERY VERY good.

I like your story... but I wish you had expanded on it

I'm not normally a fan of Lucius/Lily pairings, but I have to admit, this is a pretty good fic! Good job!

wow! I like the pairing and your story is perfect.

heya! I really liked it, is it a oneshot? It's really good!

Very nicely done. Flowed very smoothly and was captivating. Job well done.

Intresting but I like it. Lovely oneshot, I just wish there were more Lucius and Lily fanfictions out there.

is the fist time I read a Lily/Lucius fic and I'm glad I read yours first... I'm crying, what a wonderful story!

Whoa...intense. I'm surprised you didn't get more reviews. It's intriguing in a twisted sort of way...lol.

I think this story needs a little more to it but other wise I loved It!:)

i know how hopeless it can feel if you don't get many reviews, my stories hardly get any before i pull them off myself. so, even though i hardly ever review, i'm going to say that this is very good indeed. an interesting pair, and you wrote it well.

kudos!-dusty