Sweetheart, did you just compare Slytherins to black people in America? That was, in all honesty, offensive and tasteless. You're implying that black people carry with them an air of condescension and superiority, and look down on those who are not black... I understand the comparison you were going for, the whole "outsider" schtick, but that was NOT something you should have said. It's clear you don't have a very good understanding of the stigma black people face in America. If anything, they would be more likened to muggleborns being treated as less than human by pureblood elitists.

I've only just started but I'd like to leave a short review- this is exceptionally well written and ties in very well with Hermione's possible pre-Hogwarts existence. It also reminds me a bit of The Magician's Nephew by C.S. Lewis, which is one of my favorite novels. The both your writing style and the chain of events are similar, I'm enjoying it so much!

Where are chapters 2-5? Can you please post them?

Did you die? Sad to see the rewrite end this way, given the quality of "Linked."

Hi! I've just found this story. I really enjoyed the first chapter. But the rest up to Chapter 5 are nowhere to be found. Did you take them down? I was really looking forward to reading them. I hope you'll see this and owl me a reply! Thanks! :)

I will review this as if it's a one shot, since any further chapter is so convoluted as to be a part of a different story.

I loved your interactions you had. Hermione and Draco seem very true to character, and I liked the plot idea. Pity this story has died.

There is a demand for this story in full disentangled glory

The chapters for this story is so jumbled and it confuses me so much. I came from chpt 1 to chpt 6...you should call the 1st chpt a prolong or something since all the other chpts haven't Had an mention of it. And also is this story abandoned?

Bloody fabulous premise. Keep going.

Hurry!

Hi there, I'm wondering if I missed something somewhere? Ch. three (on the drop down menu) jumps straight to ch. 6 (according to your headings). I just don't want to confuse myself

How come chapter 3 says chapter 6? But this is a really good story though:)

So it's been years since this story has been updated, but I love it. Maybe this review can spark it again or maybe not, but I wanted you to know that it is amazing.

a very very short review as I have been surreptitiously reading this at work. this is wonderful. i've only just caught on to it. but it is really very refreshing. can't wait for the next instalment.

you're an amazing writer! i still have to read the rest though. i'm thinking i'll enjoy it. D

vg