wtf,,, I'm actually reading this 19 years later...

This is one of those fics that are bound to haunt. The way the emotions were written, how Emotional Mamoru and Rational Mamoru act and show their love and Usagi boundless love were something that had me at the edge.

But it's the ending what follows as a shadow. Mamoru got the chance for a new insight, Usagi got the chance to learn more about Mamoru, and somehow it didn't help neither in their relationship. It was sad because it was perfectly in character that they might end up digging a bigger hole.

Wow, I was hooked. That was an amazing story. Great insights to Mamoru's character. It does seem like he's two different people, and this was a great way to explore that, because those different sides of himself are so distinct. I love that we were able to see Emo!Mamoru react so freely because it *is* so frustrating that he's so emotionless all the time. Awesome. Great. Perfect. *Off to read your other fics*

This is one fic that has always had me rather conflicted. You're a very powerful writer, but power is not really my kinda thing. I like fluff. Loads and loads of sickeningly sweet fluff. This was a bit too angsty and dark to be a fave, but is, for those who like this kinda stuff, a good read.

This is a really good story, like all of your others as well. But, unlike all of your other ones, this one's got a glimmer of hope for a happy ending. Don't get me wrong, the pure unadultered angst and drama is just what the doctor order if you're in the mood for it. Anywayy, I really like your work and please keep up the good work.

FINISH IT! FINISH IT! FINISH IT!

That was really great! Cute :)

Your story was touching and well crafted. It reminded me a bit of the BtVS episode where Xander is split into two by a demon's weapon, the emotional Xander (left behind unnoticed by the Scoobies) stalks the controlled Xander (who excels at his job and acquires and apartment that Anya likes), the two fight over Anya and try to kill each other, and in the end they accept that both of them are necessary to the complete Xander and allow their reconnection (which is easy since that is their natural state). Actually, Xander was also split on accident, as the demon was aiming for Buffy.

Even if you saw this BtVS episode, you reworked the story to delve into the emotionally fragile parts of Mamoru fans don't often get to see and the complex interactions between the supporting characters. You took an overwritten angsty portion of the Sailor Moon series and made it both interesting and insightful. You should be pleased with your accomplishment.

Wow... In a way, I really liked it, but in another sense, it really disturbed me. You understand, ne?

Hmmmmmm...interesting and very very well done. I've never seen Buffy, but maybe I should start watching it...it sounds interesting.

Very good fic, you captured Mamoru's feelings...well really really really well. (ha ha ha...me thinks I'm turning into V-babe) Anyway, really great job!

I really liked it!

-Opal Lynn _

the is by far the best r season break up fic, and it's original! heh, well sort of, love the use of a buffy storyline, you touched more on it than they did and believe me, writing a better story than a buffy ep is definitely an achievement.

this is the best fic!

*sigh* True talent. Your stories are so original and well, gripping! It's hard to stop reading and start studying for my calc midterm. T_T

Nietzsche is not Russian, he is German or Austrian philosopher. :-)

Nice work, lots of angst, you had me off sniffing and such...

Sooooooooooooooooo good. Good? No, not good. GREAT! Amazing, phenominal, *very* well written.

This was a great story but again I don't like it that they are making Mamoru seem like the bad guy when he's not. As for Raye, even if there are 2 Mamorus, they will be both Serena's and won't be shared. I kind of didn't understand the last sentence. Anyway great story. Write more Mamoru and Usagi stories but stay away from the breakup. MAMOCHAN AND USAKO FOREVER!