| Reviews for Return To Me |
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   DalWriter chapter 22 . 7/18/2019 Ahhh it's all one big tied together conspriacy |
| DalWriter chapter 20 . 7/18/2019 I love Trish. Harm must have been so cute turning her broom into a fighter jet. I'm shocked Mac didn't recognize Jarvis. |
| DalWriter chapter 19 . 7/18/2019 Jarvis is one sick puppy. I really don't think Vukovik is as bad / evil as you make him out to be. Smarmy yes but not pure evil. I guess the plan is to scuttle his career when it coms to light that he's a collaborator. I think him letting Jarvic impersonate a Marine could rise to the level of treason. |
| DalWriter chapter 16 . 7/18/2019 Way to go Mac! |
| DalWriter chapter 14 . 7/18/2019 Not how I would have expected it, but FINALLY. Harriet & Bud in a bar fight; too funny |
| DalWriter chapter 12 . 7/18/2019 This chapter & Harm's excuse didn't work for me. As a reservist he's still part of the Navy & entitled to wear his uniform. I know you wanted to add to angst & the push pull of their relationship - Harm not able to get out of his own way - but I really think he would have agreed to go as her date. He also woudl have teased her about the use of that word as opposed to her escort or plus 1 |
| DalWriter chapter 11 . 7/18/2019 Love them hot bunking. She should have been a braver Marine & kissed his lips. |
| DalWriter chapter 9 . 7/18/2019 Will a man of his height fit into a tub? Aphrodisiac indeed. I was so hoping for some line about sharing. ;) |
| DalWriter chapter 8 . 7/18/2019 Wasn't expecting that . . . so was it his EX or hers, or his case? |
| DalWriter chapter 7 . 7/18/2019 I would have liked to read the seen where Harm talked to Vic. lol Glad you brought Keeter back |
| DalWriter chapter 6 . 7/18/2019 Hope she's giving him a green light for real |
| DalWriter chapter 5 . 7/18/2019 I could see him blushing as he gave her the flowers. I liked how she got miffed when she thought he was using her but they were able to work through it. Those were some deep conversations. What happened to Harm's corvette? |
| DalWriter chapter 4 . 7/18/2019 Two nit picky things: 1). Mac would not have said 6 when talking about time. She & Harm are military. She would have said 1800. My husband was on in for 4 years but he still has trouble telling civilian time. 2). I doubt somebody as young as Vucovik could have gone to OSC, college & then law school. He has to be ROTC or the time line doesn't work. I think I remember a episode toward the end where they said he went to law school in PA. It's still a compelling story. |
| DalWriter chapter 3 . 7/17/2019 Yeah Gunny for telling it like it is. How bad is Vukovick that he still hasn't made Lt. Commander? |
| Inkysplatt1 chapter 1 . 4/10/2019 Radiorox. I’ve stumbled across another of your stories. It’s 2019 Thank you. I spent a pleasant Wednesday evening reading |
