awsome you totaly did him justice lol :)

hee~~ more of Sky fanfic! once again, I love it!

I love this story! You did Sky justice though i hate to pick it didnt have where she loved him in the plalace but it was beautiful! dont mind my pickiness! beautiful,beautiful story!

This was simply amazing. I always loved Ling/Sky pairing, but you made the whole thing very believable, everything just seems right in your story. Very well written.

I love all your stories about Sky, you make him sound even better than in the game. It's like he *is* yours, not Bioware's. Keep writing, it's beautiful.

I freakin' loved it! Sky is my favorite character is well.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Fantastic fic. You captured Sky perfectly. Loved it. Great job. :)

that was sad and touching. i really like your stories about sky and "ling". i also liked the begining about his daughter. it was deffinetly a good begining. i can't wait to read more of your stories!

That's so... adorable. I'm a bit of a sucker for guys with tragic pasts, I'm afraid.

Your writing. I'm speechless. Great relation of being too late for his daughter and for Ling. Awesome job.

Wow! This is so good! You wrote it really well and definitely captured the essence of Sky. Though there was a spoiler, it's to be expected with something like this.

I loved your story - please write more!

I hope I'll be able to upload my own story soon - it will also have a great deal of Sky in it... :)

Keep up the good work!

That was just beautiful. I didn't think it was sappy at all. Excellent work.

Wow! Great love story!

I really liked your work! You gave a great description of Sky's feelings, much what I thought Sky would feel when I played the game. Very nice!