What a funny retelling of a classic fairytale! I love Lania's character and how she does what she wants to do instead of what people expect her to do, I wish though you did not have two gigantic paragraphs in the beginning and the middle. It is a lot to take in and you can break it up into two or three paragraphs each. I really did love this and I hope to read more.

Love love LOVE this!

I love this story. I think that sometimes the regular fairy tales are just too predictable. This one was funny, but short. That made it better. The only thing I didn't like was that two or three of the paragraphs were too big, making it hard too keep my place. I hope you get this review, since it has been a log time winces you posted it. It was very enjoyable.

This story is so AWESOME! It's funny how the queen fainted because Eliana's eyes were the color of "rotting flesh" and how she died trying to change it!

Hahahahahaha, she died trying to change her eye color! THat's funny. Sorry, I'm done now. Great story though, very cute and sweet. Did you know Corin is the name of a prince in "The Horse and His Boy"?

love!

thank goodness for petty people.

the story in the beggining seems a bit rushed with everything happening too quickly, but you spaced it out and explained things in the end.

Ok. Honestly, this is the best Fanfiction I've ever read, and it's one of the better fairytales I've read. You have real talent, and I hope you keep up with your writing. You took a well known story and made it your own by adding elements that were entirely your invention (that would be the magic talent she has.). That is a sign of real aptitude, and you'd be stupid to waste it.

This also reminds me of my style of writing, which I hope doesn't sound conceited after saying all these nice things about it.

Anyway, I loved this story. I guess I'm supposed to give advice or something, but the only thing I can think of to say is that it would be easier to read if there was more space on the page. For example, if you made more paragraphs. It's just easier on the eyes for some people.

Thanks so much for writing this, because it really is excellent! If you want to talk about writing or something, you can email me.

"the color of rotting flesh"! hahahaha

that is so funny! i love it!

Frankly, I was disappointedwith this one, Faeriegurl. You got a lot of stuff out of The Princess Test by Gail Carson Levine(The greatest author on earth). Overall a good story.

Oh, I love it! This is a really really really good retelling of The Princess and the Pea. It's wonderful! Keep up the good work and write more like this!

haha, that was a good story!

what ever happened to that broken ankle of hers?

AW... thats such a good story, i like it thanks for makeing my day, and have a happy thanksgiving

That was good! Just like all your other stories! _ Which, by the way, you need to update!

I heard you were going to publish a story, but that you weren't going to post it on this site. Could you email me the title and the first chapter, so I know which one it is when I look for it in bookstores? Please? My email is on my profile, please email me! Thanx!

rots? I had no idea. O.o

Oh, and I LOVED this story! It was so good! . Keep up the great work!