| Reviews for Uninvited |
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Guest chapter 5 . 3/28/2019 Wow this is so well written. The characterizations are amazing. There's only five chapters, but I'm already hooked. So sad this hasn't been updated in almost 14 years. Why do I do this to myself. ~ |
quististrape67 chapter 1 . 3/13/2018 I just wanna say that you're such talented writer lady.. |
Sychronergy chapter 5 . 9/3/2012 This is kind alike the story where you read, knowing it's not finish, get the last chapter, and realize with some kind of sadness, that it'd probably never be finished. Nonetheless, I enjoyed every chapter you've posted and, and I really think you've amazing talent. Not to mention an interesting story line and brilliant characterization. You've kept them true to their original character, and it would have been amazing to see this story develop. |
Sychronergy chapter 4 . 9/3/2012 Your writing IS really good. ;-; Much, much love for you. |
Sychronergy chapter 3 . 9/3/2012 I really like this. At first I was slightly put off by the 'Who's talking to who' and 'what's going on' thing that went on in the first chapter, but I really like how this fic is turning out. It's a true pity that the last update was years ago. :( |
Sychronergy chapter 2 . 9/3/2012 "YES GAI-SENSEI!" Lee cried out. "And I shall finish three bowls in thirty seconds else I shall run a hundred laps around the Academy Oval on my hands!" "Then, I must finish four bowls in twenty seconds, or I will run three hundred laps on one hand!" Haha, I loved those lines. They cracked me up. I'm really loving the story so far. I think Neji's exercise is brilliant, and it fits him very well. |
Firefly's Rebirth chapter 5 . 8/27/2009 I was wondering if you ever planned on updating this story further. Cause years after reading this fic for the first time, it's always stood out as a most interesting fic and I'd love to see its completion. Please consider finishing it! |
Offensivebunny chapter 5 . 6/30/2007 I have no words for how incredibly interesting this story is! Not only that but you've got my favourite pairing (of the moment) in it xD I can't wait for the next chapter! |
DancingDragonBlaze chapter 5 . 2/16/2007 It was really good! -pouts- you haven't updated for TWO years! PLEASE UPDATE? I LOVE THIS STORY! Ja ne! DDB |
DancingDragonBlaze chapter 1 . 2/16/2007 I LOVE NEJISASU! 8D I have NejiSasu stories - because i'm a huge fan! Yours is great, but if you want, go check mine out, kk? I think I have... -counts- ...four... but i'm not sure. I LOVE THIS PAIRING! And this story is really interesting - i can't wait to see how it turns out! Update soon! -goes off to read the other chapters- Ja ne! DDB |
ruinedkuria chapter 5 . 1/5/2007 ahh, update soon. I am amazed by the details put into this. Great work! |
Rosegoldmoon chapter 5 . 11/22/2006 Interesting, indeed! I hope you continue, NejiSasu yay! |
i-see-faeries chapter 5 . 11/11/2006 This is really nice ... Great writing style and not rushing things ... Update soon! |
i-see-faeries chapter 3 . 11/11/2006 This |
yukininja chapter 1 . 7/26/2006 Im a read the rest later. Good so far. ~*~SHINRA~*~ |