This is just so sweet, gosh, love how Fleur peptalk to Bill

Oh awwww this was such a sweet oneshot. I wasn't a big fan of Fleur and Bill getting married when I read the books, but this makes me like the couple a lot. Fleur was very in character, but I liked that you basically made her point out, "Look we both have a (mostly) healthy sort of love for each other, so why are we arguing? We both know there's a chance we could die, so let's just grow up." It was also so sweet how Bill wants to spoil Fleur and not make her spend her money to keep them afloat and that he wants to be able to support her.

I thought it was amusing how Fleur was pointing out how she's the best at winning arguments between the two of them without being like, "Na na na naaah na!" you know?

This oneshot was such a nice read. I really like your perspective on what they might argue about. It didn't really occur to me that Bill and Fleur might argue about being so fearful of the other dying. I guess it shouldn't come as a shock, given what they've had to go through in the books (ex: Battle of Hogwarts, Bill getting attacked by Fenrir, etc). But it was also nice to see that at least in here, they're more like a usual couple. In the books, to me, it seemed like they were kind of obnoxiously lovesick for each other (or at least Fleur was for Bill). And it was so nice to read about them actually having a small conflict.

I loved this story! I love their different takes on mortality and the future.

I really enjoy your bill/fluer stories! I like this one a lot. I love Tonks's comment at the end.

Basically... awesome job.

could u please write more bill/fleur fics. perhaps one on fleur being pregnant

this was so cute. on my fav. list already.

that was really cute...

I can really picture that happening...

keep writitng!

AHAHAHA! I love the ending...oh just so classic... so beautiful... so adultishly perverted! Hehe! I can't believe Mrs. Weasley didn't freak... then again, she does have a HELL OF A LOT of kids... mean she had a hell of a lot of- ew old people doing- OH GOD! I'm scarred for life... and it's just a fictional character.

Rabid HP fans in the background: THEY ARE NOT JUST FICTIONAL CHARACTERS! HOW COULD YOU?

Me: Oopsie? -innocent face-

Rabid HP fans: LYNCH HER!

Me: ... This is the part where I run for my life screaming mommy, right? -blinks as the rabid fans nod and I start running like crazy screaming like a banshee- SAVE ME! CALL ANIMAL CONTROL!

Rabid HP fans: -increase their pace just because of my 'animal control' comment-

Me: -whistles and calls a cab and hops in- -blows rasberry at Rabid HP fans and calls Animal Control- MUAHAHA!... Oh yeah hi... when can I pick up my pet Kinkachu (very random but I think they're cute)

Oopsie, I think this review is too long... Sorry if I bugged you.. and if you actually read this completely through.. well then you rock my socks dude!

I love your depth. Very smooth, flowing, and a touch of humor at the end. Geez, I would never be able to win against Fleur! You put so much into her character; I feel like I know her. Fantastic job!

I've been meannig to find some Bill/Fleur fic and yay, I spotted this wonderful story on your profile. Love it. :D Such a big grin. Off to read more of yours...

God, I love you.

This story was magnificent, and Molly's reaction at the end was priceless and perfectly, perfectly in character.

*shifty eyes* Do you mind if I borrow the twins idea for a future fic? It makes perfect sense, really.

I like the werewolf carryover from Bill's attack, and I think it's very reasonable that it would drive him to recklessness. And I also like how Fleur wins arguments by simply talking all the time.

But my favorite line was "she knew a Silencing charm when she didn't hear one."

Brilliant.

that was really great!

"Oh, honestly," she muttered to herself as she climbed back down the stairs to help unpack the shopping. "It's no wonder they're having twins."

bwahahaa...

Oh, LMAO! That last line is great. I love, love, loved the whole fic. It's probably the best BW/FDW fic on here so far. Seriously, that was so sweet! OK, I'm off to read your other one now! Ta-ta!

Love from

Lyny Angell

Again, another...'bewitching' story. ;-)

Glad to see Fleur is getting more acceptance from the family. And I had to laugh at that last line:

"It's no wonder they're having twins." - this coming from a mother of 7 children...