Reviews for Loss of Innocence
anonymous chapter 5 . 10/1/2007
i absolutly HATE ginny, seriously and thep part with hem made me feel sick, and harry wouldn't just blab that he knew about horcruxes to ginny lupin moddy and whovever else was listening the whole soppy ginny/harry fluff has made me never want to read the rest of the story so sorry but i wont be, i liked it but the pairing is so horible and put that in the syummary, and actually put in a summary to tell us what the hell this story is about i mean this just seams like your version of the deathly hallows and sorry no ofence but there has been so many done that it just takes off the edge! nothing personal its the harry/ginny thing that made me stop reading this story, its so annoying and cliche a pairing plus its so annoying in stories when he just TELLS her everything i mean dumbledore alowed him to tell hermione and ron but he didn't want anyone else to know and by telling her he is dishonouring his memory, seriously i am not obssessed or anything but its true!
anonymous chapter 3 . 10/1/2007
ok if this is harry/ginny put it in the summary its such a horible pairing and franckly i cannot stand reading harry praise ginny it makes me want to hurl and they trio would never just talk about grimmauld place in the open how dumb can they get hermione just like 'LETS GO TO GRIMMAULD PLACE' in a public place anyone could be listening! and you shouldn't have made harry have exteremly short hair he would so not suit that, and whats with those glasses PLASTIC FRAMES, what the hell, what is he 5
anonymous chapter 2 . 10/1/2007
kl but what is this story about i mean you didn't tell us a thing in the summary and i reckon Harry should have gotten contact lenses instead of other glasses i mean the glasses would be a hazard when fighting because he could loose them or something and they would be a weakness, also harry with extremely short hair that sounded horible you should make it spiky or something and hermiones hair, there is no way harry would think hermione pretty i mean if this is hermione/harry at least put that in the summary its a really hideous pairing! the type of hair that hermione has (think frizzy and bushy) would take hours to get straight and another hour to dye it there is no way her hair would change that drastically in that short amount of time, i mean sure harry's hair only took a short time but he only had it cut, hermione's hair would take around 2 hours to straighten properly or at all, its just unrealistic !
Ginny278 chapter 30 . 1/20/2007
Hey,

Great Story, I thought it was awesome, some parts were a little confusing though like when Harry tried to save Ginny, but I figured it out, Really cool story, you did a wonderful job..
SmileyMare1810 chapter 30 . 4/23/2006
This is the first Book 7 fic that I have found that actually finished the year! THANK YOU SO MUCH! also I greatly apreciate how much interaction there was between Ron, hemione and harry, most stories become singularly Harry/Ginny. I appreciate how well you stuck to cannon yet managed to entertain. the sheild thing was a little weird, and I was surprised that voldemort would rather the sorting hat than the sword when he attacked Hogwarts. Also if he did make the the hat into a horocrux then how was harry a horocrux? likewise what was with the "my wife" comments harry said to voldemort? Also, if harry is a horocrux then does that mean that voldemort's soul is floating arould like it did last time it when his horocux's save him? please answer in some fashiong. I would greatly appreciate a sequel but would likewise respect your amazing ending here. Thank you so much for all the time, enrgy and effort you have put into this story and I greatly respect you! thanks again.
ZuzuBlack chapter 30 . 3/8/2006
beautiful
BadHatHarry chapter 30 . 3/2/2006
I greatly enjoyed your story and am sad to see it come to an end. But it had to happen at some point. You are a great writer and I hope to see some more of you work.
bjon66 chapter 30 . 2/28/2006
Killer story,, i guess Harry was'nt so wimpy at the end...

lol.. Now i will start reading the sequel... Hope its as good as the original...
bjon66 chapter 17 . 2/28/2006
Lol,, poor Harry, still wimpy,, he better watch out, Hermione might whup his butt...lol...

Why did'nt the deatheater kill him? He whipped Harry's

butt without any problem... He could of killed him right there... hm.. He better keep Ron and Hermy with him at all times to watch over him..lol.. I still like the story though...
AerLynn chapter 30 . 2/28/2006
Awesome! I really like the ending.
Red-Devil15 chapter 30 . 2/26/2006
sequel? SEQUEL? YAY FOR SEQUEL! WOOHOO!

sad that it's done. happy about sequels! YAY!
iamfaraway chapter 30 . 2/25/2006
Aww such a happy ending! And Harry got Dobby! Woot. xDI really loved this fic. You wrote it so well, kept the characters IC... This was beautiful. I can't wait for the sequel!
adreus chapter 30 . 2/24/2006
beautiful :) i cant wait until the sequel!
AerLynn chapter 29 . 2/14/2006
Cool.
Asher 0918 chapter 29 . 2/3/2006
YAY! I can't wait for it!
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