| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Search for the Horcruxes |
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   twisterblake2010 chapter 1 . 1/10/2011 hey great chapter |
| Lord Kenshin Himura chapter 2 . 3/29/2007 I don't like this story much even though yours seems to be one of the longest ones available atm about book 7. The reason is simple, the first two chapters wouldn't make any sense if it was in the real HPverse. Harry can't just ignore the minitry underage law just like that and the Wesley's would certainly not ignore Harry breaking such law. Second, I hardly think Harry would be able to go into 12 Grimwald place like that even less get the locket this easily. In the 2nd chapter, you also have the granger's visit the Wesley's as if they were able to just pass by their house like that, which should be heavily protected with magic at the moment ever since it was considered as a temporary 2nd base for the OofP. Finally, if Valdermort did try to make a new Hororuck with the one from Nigani he certainly wouldn't take the minister's left eye, he needs something that can survive a long time, like say his pedenant watch or something. |
| Unforgivables chapter 1 . 9/6/2006 IMPERIO!(update update update update) |
| AVADA KEDAVRA chapter 24 . 9/4/2006 Sorry for not keeping work though... |
| Rhia2020 chapter 24 . 8/27/2006 Update soon! Wow Aunt Petunia, a muggle death eater how'd that happen? lol |
| Rhia2020 chapter 1 . 8/18/2006 Wow I just started reading your story and it sound really good! On to the next chapter lol. Bye bye, Kaggy's Evil Twin |
| potterlover06 chapter 24 . 7/2/2006 HEY YOU NEED 2 UPDATE! THE STORY IS 2 DAMN GOOD! |
| Lizzi chapter 19 . 6/6/2006 Okay, so far I've tolerated most of the story line. It's not half bad, there are some things that I don't agree with, but to each his own. The main problem I have, and the reason I can't continue reading, is your horrid grammar. I mean I cringe at every sentence. Spell check was invented for a reason. Also, taking a basic spelling and grammar course wouldn't hurt either. You're mixing past with present and future tenses. It is so frustrating. I'm surprised you have as many "followers" as you do. Anyway, if you correct the grammar, I'll keep reading; if not, sorry dude! |
| Lauran chapter 24 . 5/9/2006 Amazing again! Sorry, I have been somewere where ther is no internet! I hated it, and I just finally got a chance to catch up on my fanfiction. Great details and I loved the whole thing. you did a great job. I just want to know what happened to the lady, the muggle lady, was it petunia, like harry's Aunt Petunia? If so, what happened to Uncle Vernen and Dudley? Well hey great job, I mean magnifco! Your fathful( maybe) reader ~*~Lauran~*~ |
| Miranda Took chapter 24 . 4/11/2006 I like your language and plotmaking but there are certain things I can't accept: to start with, the entire order can't know about the order,Dumbledore specifically said it would be a secret between Harry, Ron, Hermione. 2ndly, Voldemort and his deatheaters are simply too arrogant to find or accept muggle followers, 3rdly Voldemort can't just leave a horcrux-one of his priziest possession with the one most interested in destroying them. but you are entitled to your ideas and I must say you done a pretty good job so the way, I like your idea of a realm of the souls beyond the veil, you had used the same idea in the other story, its quite interesting! |
| bountyhunterc chapter 24 . 4/10/2006 I'm glad Lupin made it out ok, he's one of my favorite characters. good chapter. |
| bountyhunterc chapter 22 . 4/10/2006 a very touching chapter, great detail about Lily and James Death. |
| bountyhunterc chapter 21 . 4/10/2006 good, chapter with the chamber you went into such detail decribing it. good work |
| bountyhunterc chapter 20 . 4/8/2006 The story keeps geeting better |
| Miranda Took chapter 4 . 4/8/2006 BRILLIANT,there's no other word! |
