MOMORU SAVED USAGI ITS SO SWEET

sweet sauce? I don't think that there is anyway that particular phrase wouldn't sound at least a little wierd.

Sad, but sweet. Changing moods. Nice.

Very well written. I like the way he was so protective of her. Great job!

A good one-shot. The title was what got my attention. Very sweet. I was a little confused about if she knew who he was and vice versa and how Motoki knew, but it was still a good story.

Jikka-chan, why had you to start the story all sad.i can't help feel very bad to what happen to i agree with your tuxedo mask,the bastard should have been made to suffer and kill on the 's what i think the fate should fall on i do agree that usagi need him more and he should stay with her.i can't believe however that mamoru would have hit motoki i mean the guy is soo diplomatic that i think a terrorist will still like him.i thought mamoru and usagi will be nice to each other but i guess you're right they won't be usagi and mamoru if they don't fight.i feel that you want to show that the world is not always happy but please Jikka-chan, next time make it a happy encounter coz i can't picture usagi soo sad.

That was so sweet, I wish I had a guy like that. I'm kind of glad that he stayed with Usagi instead of going after that creep. You are a very good authour. Keep up the good work!

Wow that was beauiful. I can't wait for the next story and when you update you other one.

palikani

great start please update soon

Aw. That's so sweet! He rescued her! Good luck on the next chapter and God Bless!

Sweet and short. Like a nice candy.

Aw! That was such a cute story! You should make more chapters rather than making it a one-shotter! This chapter would make a great epilogue to a much longer story! _

Hiya!

I wouldn't mind taking out that rapist jackass either. From what Usagi said when she first woke up, it seems as though she ALMOST got raped and Kamen got there in time, but the actions in the alley make it appear as though Kamen got there too late. Which was it?

This is a wonderful story! But I've got a feeling it's just a short story, one-shot thing, isn't it? Well, if any more gets added for whatever reason, I'll be sure to read. If not... well, then there's no more.

But in any case, I understood maybe two of the Japanese words. Mind sending me translations?

Keep on writing! Elder sisters rule!

God bless both of you.

Aww...damn...he's not going after the creep? That would have been fantistic if he did though! I liked it! Good job!

Nice! Not a clue what's going on, but this is certainly well-written and interesting.