Why kill the snake it makes no sense and throw the plot completely of track and... ...neville losses his moment. And the sword only works bc it was drenched in the blood of a basilisk. And it was to be given to Harry upon Dumbledore's death.

* Harry Potter thinking about the Three D's fills you with determination.

Omg this was such a good story

In the books, it was never clear who was the worst sort of human: Albus or Ron.

I hope Harry starts to realize how evil Albus probably is, and how the Angleth is just keeping Albus' soul on earth so he doesn't go rot in hell. Albus has been as bad to Snape and Harry as Voldeort has been, except for perhaps personally killing their parents. Though Albus never actually saved anyone's parents despite knowing of dangers.

I love the way your Harry has believable yet impressive talents, as opposed to other writers' incredible superhero Harrys

Oh no, he forgot to check for animagi! Just kidding. Seriously, this is very fast-paced entertainment. Thanks for writing/sharing it.

Lovely chapter full of action, suspense, pathos, sweetness. Wow.

Ha. Moody will notice he's been slapped. And nobody would ever believe Harry would use the word, "Endeavor." They'll think Snape is using Polyjuice, masquerading as Harry. :D

LOL. I'm enjoying the story, especially the last paragraph in this chapter.

Hello! It is the girl from comiccon! Sorry it took me so long to comment, I had to make a account. So far this story seems great! I like the comparison of Harry’s emotions to an out of control boggart.

Hi, Im reading your story... hmmm, like, the fifth time, I think. And its really, really awesome though sometimes a wee bit difficult for me, for English is not my native. The first time I saw this story, I felt Harry and Severus to be a tad Gary-Stu, but the plot is great, so I kind of overlooked this detail sometime later, and I like the rest. But, you know, what I really, really want to tell you:

I. Absolutly. Love. William! Thats so... so Snape, you know?

Regards from Bavaria!

Honestly, he's a bit of an idiot. Wonder how on earth he hopes to survive if he can't even figure that book out.

This is a really great story with excellent characterisation; unfortunately, it's a little marred by the rather cop-out ending. It is almost 'and then I woke up'. What a pity. I guess you wrote yourself into a bit of a corner.

Still, thanks for the first 32 chapters.

Thank you so much! I really loved this story!
You are incredible good as a writer.
Thank you for one of the finest stories I read.
My regards