Reviews for The Myrmidons
Summers fang chapter 16 . 7/23
Oh! an enjoyable tale please my dearest lady do continue... I'm begging you!
Deej chapter 16 . 11/24/2019
Need. More
Calmzone1 chapter 9 . 11/18/2019
Good confrontation, other than withered(dried up) instead of writhed (wiggled) and lunched versus lurched. So go to where he was fighting the Basilisk and search for a snake drying up and becoming food...:). I always remember the spelling of withered vs writhed, especially when used in sex scenes as..withered is picture someone literally drying and wrinkling up as you/they are having sex, or they are wriggling around in pleasure of being tickled, etc. ;) :)
Sabrina Jayde chapter 4 . 11/1/2019
Followed weblink recommendation here from favorites site & really this has fallen flat. Same lame stuff written in many other stories but bit more romance, the inevitable Drarry pairing & yawn I'm so bored already! Very long winded speeches too continuous & not enough action. Did make an effort but have to quit.
Rewrite with a non fluffy brained beta would help.
MsAwesome2u chapter 16 . 2/28/2019
OMG where’s the rest!? I have so many unanswered questions about so many characters!
cabbieforhire chapter 6 . 10/16/2017
Oh, I just love how Harry and everyone just take Hermione at her word. Yeah, sure, it's believable that she was teased but the fact that they're so willing to get back at him when Harry says that he thought the boy was nice and we haven't seen any of his canon flaws yet says a lot.
dominaohyu chapter 13 . 10/2/2017
woo, thiz is kewl
and no really this is an amazing little nugget of a story you have here xx
i love the plot so much xx
Slytherin.half-blood.angle chapter 16 . 8/30/2017
So in love with this story was wondering if you were going to finish it or leave it as is?
Guest chapter 16 . 12/28/2016
Oooh please wonderful author, please updare!
Love your story so much!
Guest chapter 16 . 10/3/2016
3 one of my fav stories.
Beccissss chapter 16 . 7/27/2016
Awesome story! Hope you update soon!
2maluv chapter 16 . 11/22/2015
Omg this is so good! I am loving Harry and Draco's relationship, Harry is so attractive in how domineering and powerful he is and Draco just submits so beautifully without being all weak and pathetic haha

Loving the Myrmidons too they're all so awesome and Scrimgeour is totally barbaric for punishing them in such a horrible way :(

I really hope you continue this some day! :)
Ari823 chapter 16 . 11/17/2015
Another chapter please?!
DemeRain chapter 16 . 10/9/2015
Thanks for sharing.
Lil' Liza chapter 16 . 8/14/2015
This is really, really good. I hope you continue this, because I can't wait to see what happens next. You are an amazing writer!
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