Very good, I wish I saw more Sayid/Jack too.

squee! I love it! Way to go!

Unusual pairing... Gorgeous story

Thank you. Thank you so much for writing jack/sayaid. I can't write, and so one else seemed to enjoy the pairing enough to write about it. Yay. It is really good, and it flows nicely. I like how you kept them in character. Good job!

please write more! this chapter is awsome!

I usually avoid slash like the plague, but since purple-goose had reviewed this I read it. Interesting. I have to admit, interesting interaction between two very closed off people. You write very well.

Your description of Sayid is really good -"simply destined for unhappiness and would wearily live with it". I really liked this description as well "voice of strained steadiness stretched over a definite well of panic". The lip play, kisses, the touching, deftly done. Good closing paragraph - liked the mirror image and enjoyed the crazy/sane exchange.

I am usually a Sayid/Sawyer kind of Person. But I really can see Jack and Sayid in your Story. Wouldn't be sad to see another one to them. Even at "A world away" there is only one. (BTW you should really post this story there)

What I like for example was the scene with the kiss

And Jack remembering

And their conversation about People trusting Sayid.