please don't abandon this story!

very promising! i am looking forward to the next chapter

was that the end?hope interesting..

this is soooo cool so far, you like have to update soon

Oh, Gate, this made me so happy. Really and truly, it did. But by looking at the last update... date, I suppose I can't beg for another. Ah, well; I was never very good at begging, anyway.

I haven't checked your profile, so I don't know if you're still writing, but I'm going to subcribe and all that junk anyway. If you're in a slump, I find that always makes one feel better; and even if you're not in a slump, you're a damn good writer.

Good luck with future projects!

~proser132

I'm not a yaoi fangirl in the least, but this was quite amusing. It's well writen. You captured their personalities well. I just found myself laughing at Mustang a lot cause he seemed very...girly lol XD But I hope you keep writing. It was a fun read :D

This is hilarious! Please tell me your continuing it, lol.

Aw~ I really love this fanfiction. PLZ KEEP UPDATING :3

Amazingly awesome, I love it so far. Keep up the good work.

great so far.

LOVE the relationship progression! Love it. they're so cute. And Ed's maturity is well done! Please please update!

harhar so good. cant wait for an update

ed dated a far older widow in the other world? dont' really see that happening. and she had to have been a recent widow? why commit to a woman that moves on so easily or quickly or at all, anyway? ed probably would have been for faithful to the whole thing. the roy and hawkeye thing was funny though.

This is a really cute fic.

omg you need to update ..i mean really...8 months alomst? sheesh..BTW i love the story anyway and hope you'll continue it i want to read about ed being userd as a foot stool..XD