Reviews for Harry Potter and the Deck Master
Guest chapter 12 . 9/29
It’s been two years already and I am wondering when is the next few updates (I’m that greedy) because the content is so surreal it could be real.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/23
I love Nadeshiko’s character description here as you describe her on point! You are so well verse in CCS’s Universe/workings it’s amazing to read. Love the Harry Potter combination as well and can’t wait for the interactions.
Guest chapter 12 . 5/14/2019
Update soon please! I am anticipating for future chapters.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2019
Wowers! The information. Spot on and in-depth.
(unlike this review, lol)
AshRuleZ chapter 12 . 3/21/2019
I like this. I agree with the sorting, especially Shaoran's difficulties in it. Keep it up.
Mako-clb chapter 4 . 12/26/2018
I enjoyed seeing more of Xiao Lang's family, even if it's taking me a bit to get used to that version of his name. And, I appreciated that in this chapter, Sakura expresses her desire for Yue to be her friend.

I am curious why Yue is going with Sakura and not Kero-chan. I mean, Kero should speak some English, too. Then again, Yue has to be closer so he can feed off Sakura's magic.
Mako-clb chapter 3 . 12/26/2018
I actually thought the adults were mostly in character, except Lupin seemed to speak a bit OOC at times. It was Fred and George who seemed the most OOC. I realize they aren't in it much, but there wasn't even one serious attempt at using one of their items to spy on the adults.
Mako-clb chapter 2 . 12/26/2018
Overall, I really enjoyed this first chapter. I've always wondered a bit about Kaho and Eriol because of the age difference, both actual and apparent, and I appreciated the fact that you addressed that here. And, I really liked how you tied it in to why Eriol did what he did. It certainly gave a little more clarity and depth to something that CLAMP just barely touched on. Then again, that's typical CLAMP for you; they leave a lot up to the readers to deduce and come to their own conclusions.

I have two minor points to address. One is more technical, and I'll go with that first. While I really like that you've taken the time to provide a key so your readers know when a character is speaking English, Chinese, or Japanese and how that could affect how characters react to what's being said, I don't think you need to use /for long-distance communication/. It might be good for telepathic speech or something, but it isn't necessary for telephone conversations. After all, when talking on muggle phones, you are still hearing the other person's voice in real time, so it's still a straightforward conversation in whatever language is being used. Once you tell the reader that it's a phone call, that should be more than enough, and just use standard dialogue tags & quotation marks after that.

Although the Guardians must do what the master orders them to do, Sakura isn't one to give lots of orders, at least not on purpose, and rarely for something trivial. So, I found it a bit odd that she gave two orders alone to Yukito/Yue in this chapter. I would expect Sakura to either phrase things so they aren't orders, for Yukito/Yue to know by her tone of voice that they aren't really orders (as he usually does), or for Sakura to be embarrassed or upset that she gave Yuki and order.
Mako-clb chapter 1 . 12/26/2018
Wow, I can see you really put a lot of thought and research into this. That is impressive. Between that and your summary, not to mention that I've always thought that a crossover of CCS and Harry Potter had a lot of potential, I'm very interested.
Lover of Emotions chapter 12 . 9/4/2018
that is good. update soon please. For the issue of the files, if you get a usb drive put the files on there and they shouldn't become corrupted.
James Birdsong chapter 12 . 8/27/2018
Good chapter
Vykat chapter 12 . 8/7/2018
I loved the chapter. I was so happy to see a new chapter. Let's hope the next chapter doesn't have as many problems as this one
Cabbit and the Weasel chapter 12 . 8/7/2018
Great to see it up after so long! Here's to hoping you won't have near as many issues with the following chapters.
Sakura Lisel chapter 12 . 8/7/2018
*lol* so with Quintena Weasley here, Ginnys no longer the ONLY girl who is BORN into the Weasley family. Isn't there a rumor in canon that says the Weasleys cant produce girls or something because of some kind of curse on the family?
XxXFoxieXxX chapter 7 . 8/1/2018
The frankly spectacular detail and meticulous planning that goes into every one of these chapters is so amazing and captivating.
Every scene and moment holds meaning and vreates characterisation for all players, not just the main characters. I love how this work isn’t focused on one point of view either which allows for the internal monologues of all characters.
To sum it up: im amazed, im in love, please keep it up!
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