Again, this was absolutely amazing! I Loved it! So well written and with an interesting plot twist! :D And ohhh, the yummy visions of Trunks in bed dancing round my head! 3

Gosh. This fic is just so askjnadlna - so sweet and wonderful and heart-warming and amusing and I absolutely love it; I really do. It's such a refreshing read because I've spent the last little while going through the archives in an attempt to find a TP that I liked but (until this) I just haven't been able to find anything that struck a chord or made me /want/ to continue reading. However, I just happened across this (serendipity!) as I was trying to find something else and, gosh, I can't even say how happy it's made me to have read this fic. The characters (Trunks ) are so /them/ - just as how I would imagine them to be - and they are so fantastically real here; the plot with the box (I love the box and everything behind it!) and Pan's logic (or non-logic, aha) and Trunks' reactions and the vial and the kiss and the memories/flashbacks (I died during those, especially in the 'Saiyan Attack' one because it was pure hysterical brilliance) and alskjashf;kl everything else, basically, is all just perfection and I enjoyed every moment and every word.

What really tied this fic together, though, is your writing; your wording and your style and the way you characterized these two all just came together to create a seamless flow, a spectacular little story and a really touching sort of relationship between both that comes through in every word.

To put it simply, I adored reading this piece, really and truly; it's probably my favourite TP I've read so far. :)

Anyway, sorry for rambling and thank you so much for posting this! When I have some more time I will definitely be checking out your other stories.

x

Aw! How tender!

Haha! This cracked me up!

aww thats sooo cute.

Aw how totaly cute! I'm almost 19 and just out of the 'teenage state' but I think it's hilarious how teenagers react...You've brought out the teenage attitude really well.

Now I feel old and I really want to go back to my teenage years!

oh well,

love your story by the way!

keep wrighting!

this is by far the best TP story that i have ever read, and i love thee way you wrote them, it felt so real and so like them. thank you

This still is by far one of the best T&P stories I've ever read. Because it embraces the fact that he is older than her rather than rejects it.

Though TP somewhat creeps me out (it's just the age difference,but it isn't too horrible) THIS WAS AMAZING. It was really well written, and the characters stayed almost completely in character (though Trunks was a little OOC toward the end, but sometimes I like OOC!)

Possibly the best shipper one-shot I have ever read.

My goodness! That was beautifully written. It was just like the manga where Trunks gives Pan a kiss for her fourteenth birthday but no one ever knows what happened afterward. I haven't read a TP in a long while but this was a good one. You had excellent descriptions and kept them well in character.

-Animeguera-

“I wanted your blood not your saliva!”

*cracks up* You are amazing. I loved this.

that was so cute!

props

This has to be the cutest and most well written story i have read in a VERY long time KUDOS! i really can't find any flaws in the writing or storyline

Oh, this is very cute. You're an awesome writer.

Ohohohoho, Pan is so crazy. (She wanted to ... burn ... him out of her heart. -_-;;) And, I agree with Trunks, adorable. Aw. KAWAII! I love this fic. It's so original. Beautifully written.

*sweatdrops* I feel slightly sorry for Trunks. Pan asking for his blood MUST have been scary. And slightly freaky. *shudders*

*sighs dreamily* Ah ... sleep ... my beloved ...