Yes... in both movies fact that she fell in love instantly made zero sense. fact that they married shortly after confused me even more.

You actually made Obi wan and Padme into horrible horrible people.

I had hopped they could have saved the babies or the kids

Hum... You can try to make him the bad guy all you want but in the end Anakin was right to be suspicious. I mean written from another perspective, it's the story of a woman who deceived her husband, all but cheat on him, drove him into madness and ultimately to his death...

Loooooove this fic so much! Especially the justice you've rendered to Padme's character...how she never gave up at the end, how she's a fighter. That's her character in episodes 1 and 2 and how it should have been in episode 3. So thank you so much for writing this!

The movie now makes much more sense within this context of your writing...I'm intrigued with this new turn of events. Thank you!

Although still tragic, this version is so much better...I'm glad the "run away with me" part was cut out here..

Man, all of this stress is bad for the unborn twins and
Padme..

This really puts things in a different perspective than what I got out of canon...& I like your version more.

Gah, poor Obidala! But they're still the best in handling this situation with as much honor as they can muster..

Interesting scenes added here to canon.. Love Obi-wan's calm response to Anakin's outburst..

I wonder what he will say to the truth though...

Loooove their conversations...thank you!

Lol at that reporter..only friendly before Obi-wan. Too friendly...i'm with you, Padme..lol!

Poor Obi-wan. I hate heat too but yay! To him taking off his shirt. Where's Padme? Lol.