Reviews for What Might Have Been
K chapter 20 . 6/26
That was a really great story. Exceptionally well done.
Guest chapter 17 . 6/3
Love you and your brilliant work. Ginny ending up as a reporter really clicked! That was a great ending to a great chapter.
Guest chapter 16 . 6/3
As familiar as I was about how brilliant and epic all of your stories have been, I was very skeptical of this one, but I continued and turns out it is probably my most favorite amongst your stories, lol. Actually, Eighth is, but you're still my undisputed favorite H/Hr writer ever.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/3
I've always loved your portrayal of Ron, but I haven't seen much of his jealous rage in many of them until now, and here you manage to make his strength shine through his faults. You truly are brilliant, for the 74th time.
Guest chapter 12 . 6/3
You write the best angst of any H/Hr or perhaps any writer ever. The kind of angst I actually enjoy to read and don't feel like some masochist. You are the greatest Lorien!
Guest chapter 9 . 6/3
You are the greatest
Guest chapter 1 . 5/30
Guest, I believe you can find it in portkey. Just google search lorien829 portkey
Kathythomas chapter 20 . 5/12
I absolutely loved the ending! ️ You are one of the best writers...right up there with RobSt. No better praise as far as I'm concerned
Guest chapter 5 . 5/12
There has to be a way around this law. Such as a start date. It can't start on the date they first told people about it!
Kathythomas,
Please tell me how to find the last chapters of the Catalyst. I need the Exact address or I'll never find it! I'm old and not born to use computers or iPads. Thank you!
suziq968 chapter 1 . 11/2/2019
So I just really wanted to cover that horrible guest review. Even if I end up hating the story, no one deserves to have things like that said. Stupid guest option makes idiots brave because they sure wouldn't have the guts to say that if you could respnd. Cowardly jerks.
keitaropurple69 chapter 20 . 8/2/2019
I loved this story and it was very original in content and story telling.
Rtnwriter chapter 20 . 12/3/2018
You... YOU... you are a horrible, awful, terrible, evil, vicious, wonderful, and all around fantastic writer and story teller. Hot damn, I went into this expecting a bit of chaos and mayhem, I mean, it's a Harry Potter fic, it wouldn't be complete without chaos and mayhem. But holy crap I was not expecting the very real and well shown emotion and just general messiness of life that I found.

The pain and difficulty and the genuine care and love, the hatred and anger and anguish from all the various characters was so well portrayed through the narrative description. Posture, complexion, facial expressions, and tonal inflection in spoken word. All well displayed without being blatant and over the top. It was subtle at times and raw at others and was just generally fantastically written.

I honestly was on the proverbial pins and needles from chapter to chapter wondering just what fresh hell was coming next. Great work. Great story. I am now off to peruse the rest of your offerings to see what gems I may find.

Rtnwriter
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2018
Good
tyrannicpuppy chapter 20 . 9/14/2018
Now that is the sort of ending I love in my Harmony stories. Only thing that could have made it better were if Jamie were a girl, then it could properly close that Catalyst wound. So well written, O feel bad now for rushing through. But if I hadn't, I'd not have gotten tot he happy bit before bed and that would have been really bad. Brilliant work.
tyrannicpuppy chapter 17 . 9/14/2018
To be totally honest, I have skimmed through as much of this as possible, because it was tying my stomach up in knots watching them not be together.

And now all the knots are gone. Just peace. I should be worried about how dependent my happiness is on the relationship between Harry and Hermione in the fiction I read.

Hopefully, this means we get the bright happy fluffy ending that lets me drift off to sleep happy Harmony dreams.
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