Reviews for Checkmate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() very nice, very well written, but maybe it all went just a little too well? no arguments, i see? well, whatever it was, it was great! dont ever give up on writing! |
![]() ![]() Great Story! The last chapter was cute! ~Yuhari |
![]() ![]() Aww this was such a good fan fic, I luved every part of it, Nice job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Okay must stop but really I did that was beautiful! what was that song? It's gorgeous, please email me the name of it and who sings it. My e-mail is Thanks! Samina x |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw that was soo cute! i love it! you ended it perfectly... are you thinking of a sequel?:) Kristi |
![]() ![]() i'm so sorry! i was on vacation, i couldn't reveiw! anywho, thanx 4 going with seven! you're so kind. great final chapter, though, i love how Ron was acting. good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! i loved it! all of it! checkmate (L)_(L) thanks for making such a beautiful story! |
![]() ![]() Nice story! I love reading stories about dances. But some things that I think were a little weird...the characters were sort of out of character. I don't think they really acted like they do in the book. Also, right after each couple kissed, they were like, "OMG! I love you!" Which I think is a little unnatural, you know what I mean? Anyways, great job. |
![]() ![]() Aw, that was so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an awesome story! The way you wrote the ending was perfect. About what you should write next... well, anything you write is good to read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, that was such a great story *claps*! Now, as for what kind of story you should write next, well, i honesty dont know...but whatever floats your boat works for me :)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww cute story :D i like it. u should do a sequel :] |
![]() ![]() this is a great fanfic about ron/hermione! very cute story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! This was a really great ending! Please update for the story Your Night! The story you should write next...um...hmm...a Hermione and Ron story. ~HogwartsGirl~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() *blinks* Aw! That was SO sweet! I loved the ending. Spot on! Wizard! Ace! And if I keep using the British terms for "cool", someone's going to shank me. Once again, that was bloody brilliant! *bleeds to death on floor* ~ Oasis's Ghost P.S: The next story you write . . . Hmm . . . It should be . . . er . . . *gets ghost brain cramp* . . . Oi . . . Five hours of sleep is not enough for the average human/ghost to live/die on. Of course, no one said I was average. BUT I AM GHOSTLY! Oh! New idea! Ron falls in love with Hermione's ghost! Or the reverse. I dunno. It could be QUITE angsty . . . Dunno if you write angst . . . Which reminds me that I really should check out more of your stories . . . I'll do that . . . eventually . . . P.P.S: Procrastination rips apart the soul, so you have to read lots of fluff to heal it; fluff heals the soul, you know. P.P.P.S: MY SOUL HAS BEEN HEALED BY THIS STORY! _ Of course . . . I'm a ghost . . . Do I have a soul? What a question! |