JJ X Drake is cute.

How sad. :(

lol Dee-sexual.

Haha.

Those last few paragraphs were hilarious. It was so sexual lol.

This was an absolutely amazing fiction. It's obvious you put in many, many hours of work toward this, and I was pleasantly suprised in your knowledge of, well, everything XD. On a more serious note, it was a great fic, and two and a half thumbs go to you!

This one of the best 801 fanfiction i've ever read, well one out of two...

I always realize whenever i read 801 fanfics & stories, the author (no offend)hurries up to the sex scenes (not that i mind or hate two men doing it~). It's like the main point of their stories is sex that they missed out on a lot on details like what is the natural reaction of that character for example. Sometimes, some fanfics instantly remove the qualities the character is known for or is known to have. So it musn't be so because it's like your creating your own character (part of comment not applicable to those who really made their own character~)

So when i read this fanfic (it was quite a bit long but i'm used to reading almanacs~ hehehe...) i was really touched & i can really imagine the scenes... it really took time before drake & jj completely open their selves to one another, allowing a deeper relationship & understaning between the two of them. It's like what you call, a mature relationship. Making sure of their feelings & wants before doing action~ From simply first time meeting each other, to partnering & friendship, to blossoming love's kiss, to the intimate part of life. So sweet yet so cruel...

So Draechaeli keep on doing a good work & i hope you make more of your tasty stories! I have read a few dozen of 801's here in but yours is the only one i have favorited (that i remember~). You seemed quite have a hard time writing this fanfiction since it seems that there are only a few jj/drake fanfics & that everyone knows jj is totaly obssesed w/ dee who is in love w/ ryo. For me, it seems that you really made careful decisions in what to write because you showed a very smooth transition of jj's obssesion of dee to a burning passion to drake~ Really, if i have to rank this story, from 1-10 (if highest is 1)then i'll rank it umber one! Yeah! Ciao amiga~

well over the time it took me to read this fic. i overal liked it very much! i loved the murder mysterys too. i think that this is the best jjxdrake fics. that i've read. thank you so much for writing it.

O_O!Awesome story. Very well thought out, and good details. Really loved it, more than the otehr fics i've read that are JJ/Drake. Really appreicate you writing this, and i love the whole Dragonfly nickname, totally fits. Cant wait to read more of your work. YOu're awesom.~Ja ne~

The whole thing was very cute! I've never read any other fics of this pairing before, and I'm glad I did! This fic was definitely two hours well spent! The only complaint I have is your virtual lack of contractions. It kind of made the dialogue sound a bit stiff and formal. Otherwise, it was great, and the limes were very well executed. I was kind of hoping you would turn this last on into a lemon though. Unlike Dee/Ryo pairings; Drake/JJ sex seems like it might be a bit more interesting. I was dying to know who would end up fucking who, if at all. You'd think that Drake would no matter would, but you're writing still kept me tingling with anticipation!

Another thing I'd like to say is that I almost felt sorry for JJ in this fic. He seemed a lot for misunderstood, and somewhat alone than he comes off in the manga. I was totally empathetic sice his situation seemed almost exactly the same as mine.

One last thing; I actually liked your individual characters a lot! Usually I don't like it when authors put too many OC's in their fics, but I liked yours. They were neither annoying, nor cliche like most are.

Great fic! I hope you write more in the FAKE fandom!

sorry I've been gone so long! I review a lot of stories but you're the first person ever to dedicate a chapter to me I'm deeply touched and excited to keep reading

HAHAHAHAHA I told you didn't I? I'm sorry if I came off as crued but I'm sorry (again) because I don't a chance too glot often. anyway thanks again and keep on making story's.

Man I love your story. I know who it is. I'm sorry 2 say but im new here and I can't stop reading your story. My guess is it's that creepy lankey lady. The tought popped into my head when they where taking the D.N.A swab. I thought what about what mrs. Adams said about CSI? Could it be her but have a twin in her? so anyway I think your story is awsome and it wasn't to obvious im just smart . thank you again and don't stop wrighting storys .

This is an interesting Fic so far and I like it. I've never seen apendicitis worked into a plot like this before. Your spelling and grammar are good too, and I love your characterisations.

It was interesting reading about the relation between smoking and appendicitis. I wasn't aware that there was a link, even though I've had appendicitis (and an appendectomy) myself. If you don't mind me asking, where did you get your information?

Lovely story, I hope you continue to write.

YAY! I loved it... It made me all happy inside! I love how you ended it and enjoyed it from beginning to end!