Oh shit. Wow, it would have been interesting to see this bit of their history in that other fic you wrote with Elena as a mechanic, but I digress. This was a really beautiful piece, an I love Elena's keen observance, particularly regarding his relationship with Tifa at the time. Oh how it must have stung when he didn't remember. And those last few lines about her having to forget him now really hit home. Well done.

Beautifully done, I very much enjoyed that!

Wow...I really liked this characterization of Elena. It adds some nice insight. But the premise is so sad! ( )

Like it a lot actually. Surprisingly well done. Hope you keep writing.

Amazing. Every one of your stories that I've are utterly stunning. I never really looked at this pairing before, but I enjoyed it thoroughly.

This was good... Really sad... but good

~Plum

so sad, but powerful all the same.

thanks for the great read.

Sweet and sad, and beautifully written. I haven't read a CloudXElena story before...

horsie890: I think I get it. THINK is the key word here. Did Cloud die? So sad, sorry all of you Cloud fanpeoples.

Cloud fanpeoples: Aww...*one cries*

horsie890: You'll get over it. Anywho, it was good.

Hey Sabe,

Aw, that one was sad but sweet. I don't think I've ever seen a CloudxElena pre-game story before. It certainly made it original. I liked the different flowers and how they clearly identified each of the girls. Cloud as a soldier in the army was a very cute scene as well. Poor Elena... it was sad but lovely. Nicely done Sabe.

-T. pirate

Wow. Very touching.

This is a great story. The way you combined Elena's and Cloud's histories was wonderful as well as their relationship at the time and then in the present. The flowers were also a nice touch.

The one thing I was confused about was at what time you were implying the fight with Elena took place. I can't recall there being a battle at their first meeting. Other than that very nice.

OMG. I LOVE YOU! This is so SO worth the wait, and really just, it flows amazingly well and it's beautiful. God, I'm so happy to see this! THANK YOU!

Wow... you totally came up with an idea (teh Elena/Cloud history) that I'd been playing in my head.

And you did it wonderfully. I love this. It's beautiful and bittersweet. Ah, just...