Loved it :)

Hello! Absolutely love this! The emotions, how you tied it into the movies! Everything!

Oh and just outta curiosity would you be willing to do a Star Wars rp with me? The pairing would be Han/Luke :)

Some nice spins that make the story awesome ! I look forward to reading your other stories.

Good story! I'm assuming anakin took his darth vader Masi off though ?

How was Anakin repaired? And all those times people hugged Luke, did he just change their perception of what they felt to make them think that he was fine? They should have felt something!

That was great. A perfect ending to the story. Ben sounds so cute. Do you have a sequel for this story or would you ever consider writing a sequel? I would like to see more of Wedge and Luke's life with their growing family.

That was great. I like the slight changes that you made to what originally happened in the movie, such as the Rancor being nice to Luke and not attacking him. How exactly did Luke hide his pregnant belly from Leia though? I mean she would have been able to see it when they escaped from Jabba. I like how Anakin was healed and turned back to the light side. I love the baby's name. I can't wait to see what happens next.

this is awesome. it's beautifully written and i like the content! keep it up! ur amazing :D

cute... ;D

I love this fic and would love to see a sequal to it and to see it on other sites as I read sites like AO3 and the like. Keep up the good work.

i love this story. please update soon.

short but sweet. XD

Your story has an interesting premise, and I love the idea your trying to convey. That being said, the story is a bit choppy and short and could use a lot of enhancing and editing.

Another thing that was driving me nuts was all of the inaccuracies that I found in your story. For instance, Gavin Darklighter didn't join the Rogue Squadron until years after the battle of Endor, and he was actually about nine years younger than Luke not older. You would know this if you paid any attention to wookiepedia.

Also, there is a line in the story that is highly inaccurate. "'You are the father' Anakin said, 'deal . . . Padme swore me out when she was delivering our children'". Anakin was not there when the twins were born, and before you tell me this is AU, I will say this, earlier in the story Anakin is shocked when Luke tells him that Leia is his sister. He wouldn't be shocked if he was there.

In the second chapter there are a few more inaccuracies, but I think I've made my point. Please work on that. I would consider seriously revising this story if I were you because although there are problems with it, it still makes for an interesting premise.

One thing I want to add is about the MPreg issue. I realize that others have gotten on your case about this because they didn't think that this was possible. While I would normally agree, I like a good MPreg now and then as long as there is some kind of explanation weaved into the story that someone could read and say, "okay, I can actually see that as plausible." Like for instance, that maybe only male Jedi can get pregnant, because of some strange anamoly due to the Midiclorians in their blood.

Loved It! :-D

it's so hard to find a luke mpreg... so finding yours, and loving it was verry welcome

Thanks for writing this story.