thunk?

Hmm...

I liked it, a lot, actually. However it seemed to roll along somewhat randomly. You really got into Perrin's head.

wow how sad is that story! but boy did mat make me laugh! yes im a big mat fan but really i also like perrin...mayb you should do more of this story if you want like say the next day hahaha and they have to put up with drunk mat or something but i enjoyed you story and i wish i could write like that!

Wow, that was fantastic! You kept the characters personalitys, which is pretty hard to do in my opinion. Although I have no idea what happened to Faile (i've only read up to book four) but I still liked it. Good job!

very well done! i loved it! just like the book! it should be rock not marble though.. lol jk 5/5 stars highly recommended!

WOW! That was amazing. Simply astounding. I loved it. Is this a one shot? Cause i sure hope not. Wow man that was great.

I envy your skill. I loved it all- so poignant and dark and angsty with just enough sarcastic humor. I laughed aloud at "I've forgotten my coat." It's so Mat.

I wasn't so keen about the use of "nit", probably because Tuon's one of my favorite characters, but I wouldn't want to upset angsty!Perrin, so I won't complain. :)

‘It’s nothing like Dell’s Common.’

I loved that line. The way anything can begin to seem like home when you don't have a home to go to, then.

Well written, all of the parts. I loved Mat's attitude, so much like him. Rand 's lines were appropriate for him, especially the puppet lord part. And, most of all I loved Perrin's demeanor. Very like him.

Good job.

-Ruse

I always enjoy your works, Ersatz! I feel sorry for Perrin but i can't help laughing at everything Mat says, :). Once again, great job!

Very interesting and well written. I'd like to know what happens next!