| Reviews for The Pirate In The Bed Sheets |
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inkie pinkie chapter 1 . 7/25/2005 Ooh. Nice. Write on! |
Les Lapins Mauvais chapter 1 . 7/24/2005 Wahey, that's hot! Definately Sparrington. ) |
Mrs. R Sparrow chapter 1 . 7/18/2005 Hey. Very nice. Discriptive yet subtle, room for the imagination to work. Good Job -Mrs. R Sparrow |
mysterious-muse chapter 1 . 7/17/2005 Very nice! The descriptions are very elaborate! I liked this a lot! Well done! |
Demus chapter 1 . 7/17/2005 Did you send this to me at one point? Anyway, I'm glad you posted it, its gorgeous. I love the rhythm of the poem and your imagery is fantastic. Favourite bits- the 'takes yet untold' and the line that's just one word 'irresistible'. Also the description of his smile. Beautiful work, baby girl. Passionate, erotic and slashy! You go for him, Jamie-baby! |
ShatteredDesire chapter 1 . 7/17/2005 Ooh, I like it. Paints a great picture with whoever you want it to be. (: |