Reviews for The Pirate In The Bed Sheets
inkie pinkie chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
Ooh. Nice. Write on!
Les Lapins Mauvais chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Wahey, that's hot! Definately Sparrington. )
Mrs. R Sparrow chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
Hey. Very nice. Discriptive yet subtle, room for the imagination to work.

Good Job

-Mrs. R Sparrow
mysterious-muse chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
Very nice! The descriptions are very elaborate! I liked this a lot! Well done!
Demus chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
Did you send this to me at one point? Anyway, I'm glad you posted it, its gorgeous. I love the rhythm of the poem and your imagery is fantastic. Favourite bits- the 'takes yet untold' and the line that's just one word 'irresistible'. Also the description of his smile.

Beautiful work, baby girl. Passionate, erotic and slashy! You go for him, Jamie-baby!
ShatteredDesire chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
Ooh, I like it. Paints a great picture with whoever you want it to be. (: