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   Stonetheman41 chapter 11 . 8/4/2011 Well it really wasn't a bad fic,I really enjoyed it , but as a respectful reader I must respect your choice to discontinue it , now time for the review. Very nice story,well paced and entertaining so overall good story. And... IT'S ALWAYS THE THE CURSED 11TH CHAPTER! |
| yourknightinshiningarmor chapter 1 . 7/30/2007 Sain is quite a comedian don't you think? great story. |
| renzokuken-sama chapter 11 . 3/20/2007 Is that so? Well, I look forward to reading this one's reincarnation. |
| themagebear chapter 11 . 3/20/2007 totally not cool. after five chapters, an author loses the rights to delete a fic because they dont like it, because they have a duty to their readers (the magebear is an exception. the magebear doesnt care if anyone reads its fics or not). |
| themagebear chapter 3 . 3/20/2007 the change ini florinas character was a bit drastic. also, the magebear doesnt think fiora and farina would be so quick to be nice to sain. |
| JSB chapter 11 . 3/19/2007 I can't tell you how long I've been waiting for this day RL...it's been quite a while...like a year ago. |
| austin the sword saint chapter 10 . 8/29/2006 hahahahahahahaha the cute girl thats kind and the horsies behind what a couple please continue |
| Evil Shall Giggle chapter 10 . 5/4/2006 GOOD STORY! i love all of florina's different sides. they're so funny, the way they argue with each other. and, of course, the brave side's little comments all over the place are so awesome! keep writing! |
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/14/2006 lol, the bold side of her is kinda creepy...makes me wonder why she's talking to herself...actually, two of herself...like a multiple personality disorder...but, i love the story:D update |
| Almandine-Azaleea chapter 10 . 1/25/2006 Wow! This story is so awesome! Hilarious! Internal dialogue is brilliant, the characters are all accurately depicted, the story is adorable, and s funny! It's great! Update soon! _ |
| Almandine-Azaleea chapter 8 . 1/25/2006 Again, I love her internal dialogue! Especially the " forget about settling, I just want him down...' quip! |
| Almandine-Azaleea chapter 7 . 1/25/2006 Hehehe! Florina's internal dialogue is so funny~ _ |
| Almandine-Azaleea chapter 6 . 1/25/2006 This is great! Especially the "you kissed girls?" comment! Excellent_ |
| drunkdragon chapter 6 . 12/16/2005 I know that you justified it and all but... My only question is, do oysters work that fast? I don't know why I didn't mention this earlier, but it just kept nagging away at my head so I had to get it out. :) |
| trimurti chapter 10 . 12/16/2005 Whoa. Much better, if you ask me; I didn't think you'd actually accept my concrit. That you did, and so skillfully, shows a lot about you as a writer. I especially liked the whole Priscilla angle, especially considering what it replaced, just because she really is the most receptive out of all his female supports. One thing to keep in mind is that, when you start a new paragraph with the same speaker, you don't have to close the preceeding paragraph with quotation marks-all you have to do is start the next paragraph with them. Oh, and I'm really not sure about the bold print that occurs later on in the chapter; are they author's notes? Are they really needed in the body of the chapter? Anyway, good luck! |
