This was hilarious, I just love it.

awesome! so funny!

i love it its so damn funny!

lol. That was hilarious! I love it! Babies abounding, and women hitting on Eric. I loved the "sorry about the eye" "it's okay. Sorry about your shirt" bit!

that was great! nice work ]

Fat Ass? that was priceless. Thankfully i was home alone, so noone heard me laughing out loud like a loon. Well done.

Love it. Can't wait for more. Thanks for the laugh.

I LOVE this story! Its one of my favourite stories of all times and its hilarious! You portrayed the characters exactly as they are and i read this story over and over again! If you could add to it that would be AWESOME!

- cSi-AdDiCtEd

Please write more!

Please please please!

Lol!

! Wow. I loved that! Lots and lots hah it made me laugh real hard.

Great job.

Nicely done. I laughed quite a bit. You write Eric well. He's so endearing, it's hard not to like him. Ryan on the other hand...kind of a pill (you captured that!).

That was hillarious! I totally burst out laughing when Eric and Ryan started fighting. Classic! I'm with Ryan, Miss Denise gave me the heebie jeebies. Love It!

Oh my head! You had me laughing out loud at this! You got them all very in character with just enough screwiness to make this believeable! This is just too funny. :)

And I love the guys fighting and then saying they'd see each at work like nothing happened.

“Look what you’ve done! We had them behaving so well! And now you’ve gone and set them off!” - from Valera, and then realizing she was talking about their husbands and not the kids! That was beautiful.

And Little Wolfe is a little exhibitionst, too. I can believe it! And I don't blame Little Delko from pretending to shoot at Miss Denise - she was only looking out for her mother's interests!

Very well done.

haha that was to funny :)

This is such a bizarre and entertaining story. XD