Rin is the girl in kakashis team when they were young

I like your style of writing .Interesting...

Final Review: I totally agree with narutonarutolove's review.

This story is all over the place and seemingly random characters tossed in. I thought Kakashi was Sasori in disguise, but it was the fisherman. If Sasori is a master disguiser why disguise as fisherman in the mountains? Also Sasori just doesnt seem to fit in right, it just seems like you put your favorite characters in despite lacking purpose in the story.

Hinata is useless and seems to have forgotten her byakugan. Gaara is bland. Kankuro seems to have been forgotten. No one is questioning Kakashi's obvious rogue actions. There is more NejiXTen and ShikaXTem in a GaaHina story! :(

I was just about to ask you what happened to Kankuro.. He's a blabbermouth so its weird he barely speaks

Arghh that's not enough GaaHina.. I hope you dont make Gaara too soft. Also Rin shouldnt know Kakashi's name when he was just refered to as Kaka-sensei. Why didnt Hinata usr her byakugon to see into the forest/the mist? Will Naruto show up?!

Please update like now!

Please Continue!

This fic is very interesting. New reader here! :)

i tried to give this story I chance but...im sorry, but this story is horrible! Its so unbelievable I laughed! I don't mean to be rude or anything, but its my honest opinion, you have to improve your writing style. Good luck with that! v.v

Lolz:D Luvit! Pls continue!

This is my 2 time reading this I hope you countiue cus it is AWESOMENESS

Love it love it love it

It's been four years... And it still hasn't been updated... Sigh

can't u make the missing-nin more kinder. she's so fierce and violent(well a bit) i don't really like the fact that she says to kakashi sensei that she will kill neji and his team if she meets them again. shouldn't she be a bit merciful?

'demonic ice mirrors'. isn't that haku's jutsu?

(soz. it's just that i'm a big fan of haku.