I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

dios el final que lindo ahhh como me entristeze el final pero al menos ellos juntos por siempre asi debe ser mientras esten juntos nada los detendra! muy bueno tu fic ojala no dejes de escribir de ellos dos!

ohh que me encanta la distancia ha echo que ellos se amen y deseen mas me encanta tu fic a pesar de que apenas lo descubri eres genial escribiendo!

sii dante y vergill yeahhh!

ohh dios es dante y vergil cierto que si es asi me muero de emocion KYAAA!1

Awww so cute!

Oh No!

woah!

My eyes were like this O_O when i read Trish call him "Vergie" i was like Fuck now you gonna get it bitch! lmao

Love it!Sorry I tend to write reviews after I read all the I might actually review this too u dun I love this story,if I have an account I would actualy fav this story. first I kinda despise rune bcuz he's vergil's son but then after seeing the character,I kinda admire him but not as much as I love Dante n Vergy ,anyway great job on the detail! Keep it up!

OH NO HE DIDN'T! GET HIM VERGE GET HIM! SLICE HIM INTO LITTLE PIECES, SALT HIM, DEEP FRY HIM, SALT HIM AGAIN AND THEN SERVE HIM WITH CHIPS... to Rune. BTW: Chapters before - I love Dante! HE'S HILARIOUS! Great work.

I read this story dozens of times and I loved it. This is the greatest story. please do sequel. Another thing if you make your own story into a novel, I would buy it. Keep up the good work.

3 It isn't often that I read a story that impresses me to the point where I just HAVE to review it, but I'd have to say this is one of them. It has a well thought out plot, introducing the kid was done in a believable way not just 'hey they need a kid and BLAMO magic here he is'. The relationship is sweet and keeps the tension there instead of just dismissing it as unimportant. Nice.

great story. Can't wait to read the sequel!

Okay okay, I'm so pissed. I typed a really long review out for all chaps but it got lost when my com disconnected... Anyway, I just wanted to say that you should be posting the sequel real soon before I die of suspense! Pretty please?

In point form since I really don't want to type out everything again, I loved:

-Trish's characterisation.

-Your crafting of Rune (cause he was so awesomely Dante- kinda like a guideline not to craft a weirdo ne?)

-Vergil's badass side in one chapter

-Vergil's overprotectiveness

-Dante's backfired joke (about the head or the ass one)

Problems were:

-Presence of OCs, Rune was good but as most OCs do, it displaced Vergil's character, which was why I thought Vergil's intial characterization was better.

-Emotions changed too fast.

-How could you get Dante raped? I was crying damnit! (Okay, this isn't a problem point- more like a score point)

Overall I think you did great, though Vergil was a tad too talkative. Please write more!