if eggman was broadcasting a call to the president from the ark, how did tails come to the conclusion that eggman shouldnt have gotten there so quickly?

Pretty good story.

Are you going to finish this, like, EVER!?

Cool story, but you haven't updated in so long... :,(

I really love this story a lot, I very much want to make a continuation of this story if I can just get in contact with you.

I'm not gonna lie. I signed up just to review this and hope to god you continue it. I first read it years ago, but I figured then it would update soon. Looks like I was wrong :P I would be eternally greatful if a new update came soon

This is probably one of the very few stories in FanFiction to actually have chapters which are the length of regular chapters in books.

The plot to this story is well thought of - there are enough twists and plot arcs to prolongue the action which is great for a lengthy read. It seems that over the last two chapters a lot of new characters (to the story) were introduced. Many of them are in the spotlight for a short period, but it is enough to give the story dimension, which is good.

Knuckles does seem overly cynical, but it is understandable in this circumstance. It is good to have Tails and Amy Rose with him as it balances the mood.

If there is one element where this story falters, it is during a scene change. The dialogue or action changes with barely a sentence notice, which at times can be quite confusing. Perhaps a one or two sentence introduction to the new scene would suit the changes, or even a horizontal ruler or asterisks. There are only a few parts like this, but the sudden jumps create a waver in the flow of the story.

I do hope you continue with this story as it is well written with a lot of imagination and inovation driving it.

now this is just weird. i keep coming across fics i could swear i reviewed. maybe i reviewed it on Mediaminer or something when i still went on that site. anyways, this is defintely among my favourite unfinished fictions. honestly, if you... you know, updated more often, i think it could have had a really great little fanbase going on. i dunno, but its a good fiction for fans of Tails, Knuckles or Shadow. mabe the Sonic death puts people off, im not sure, but i love it :)

so please update, or if your not planning to, start writing another Sonic Fic! i adore your style!

this was a story that i really liked. I hope you wil update whenever you get an appropriate chance.

Not as bad as the rest of the stuff up on this site, but it's not grand, either.

Let's see.

Start using synonyms, get a wider vocabulary, improve the dialogue, the format, description, and characterization.

Fights need to grow fiercer, flow better.

One katana, two katana. Or one katana sword, two katana swords.

Campy.

oh yes this was definetly a good story i enjoyed it alot very intense and i think its really cool to have someone write a story where knux actually stands up and fights that should be cool because i think there have only been two other stories onthis site where knux actually uses martial arts to fight with that would be cool to read about him preparing for his final fight with shadow and actually show that knuckles can actually keep up with him and might even beat "the ultimate lifeform" since knux can harness the power of the chaos emeralds just as good as he can its just that no one has ever showed that before. sorry about rambling on and on but im a knux fan and i love your story

i love this story it kind of weird to actually see knuckles in a leadership position with the sonic crew without sonic i like that you put rouge in the story i love knux and rouge together its always funny but anyway as much as i dont like blue boy its kinda sad to not see him .great story i love knuckles stories cant wait to see more

I have been reading this fanfic since it started and I have to say it's one of the best fanfis I've read.

I mostly like the plot: A Sonic story without Sonic. The other characters are trying to get over his death and defeat Eggman, even if some of them don't really believe they can make it. In these dark ages, even characters which used to be total morons in the series seem to have matured and are now facing situations they couldn't even imagine themselves dealing with before. I personally never imagined that so many thoughts could fit in Knuckles' mind.

The way you are writting is also really good. You know how to catch the reader's attention and create suspens. The fanfic has both action and emotions and some nice descriptions too. I might be wrong but at some points your writting style reminds me of Christopher Paolini's in Eragon.

Another thing I like is that while the story is serious with battles and deaths etc. you sometimes add some little jokes here and there. Unfortunately, these aren't good enough to make people laugh like crazy but they sure keep the story from becoming too dramatic.

The only problem is that sometimes you talk so much about the characters' thoughts and emotions that you get away from the main plot. If you can be careful with this the fanfic will be almost perferct (I say almost because there's always something you can improve in anything you are doing).

Wow.

Just... Wow.

This is the best Sonic the hedgehog story I have ever read. You took the hardest concept in the HISTORY of sonic the hedgehog fanfics and just nailed it in between the eyes. I remember seeing this story on another fanfic website and I wrote two reviews because I wanted you, no, NEEDED you to continue the story. Now that it's on I can know when you update it! I'm so Happy! _

The only real problems are a few typos i noticed in the first few chapters and, although I like the way you picture the Characters, I don't think Knuckles is THAT heartless, is he?

Please continue, otherwise I will track you down and do something Very, Very bad.