I see the Yu Yu Hakusho references Sango’s last name being Jagan and Mr Takanaka. Amazing start!

Ooh the story's picking up!

Mayhaps? Hmm. Good story so far though; I'm not a big fan of Sango's character right now but we'll see how it goes.

... It's quite nice poetry you have there. Author San,
don't stop making these interesting stories to read!

I ABOUSTUTLY LOVED THIS STORY! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed on the last chapters because i was so busy reading them! Your work is brilliant! The plot, characters everything! I'm suppose to be sleeping right now but I just had to finish reading this story! Anyways I've gtg read the sequel! Please keep writing this! I never want it to end!

Brilliant first chapter can't wait to read the rest

i can't sign in atm... i just finished reading your story, and it is mmost inspiring... my only problem is you ended it w/ too many missing stuff. the mother thing is genius, but i want him to have tokijin again! arghh! lol i am hooked. you need to make a sequel! oh, and i was too busy reading to correct it but you wrote defiantly instead of definately in an early chapter. you rock!

may your ink always flow,

Alechaos Ogigio

What? WHAT! ARE YOU KIDDING ME! How could it end like this! Besides Kagome and Inuyasha aren't technically together either so what the hell! CURSE YOU FOR YOUR CLIFFHANGER! lol

Hey Sky good chapter. short but detailed and well balanced. cant wait to read more

Eeep! I loved this story! While I thought that the sidestory about the Kitsune Clansmen was a bit dragged out, that is just my personal opinion. Thank you so much for writing this! :)

I do not think I have seen the use of the word mayhaps since I last read my shakespeare and dickens. LOL Great story!

WOW! I am glad I happened across this title on another site. I normally do not read stories of this nature (AU or where the characters have been changed in there characterization) because they are usually poorly written and hold no excitement. However, this story is amazing so far and I love it! I cannot wait to see what you have done with some of the other characters from the original canon! Great job!

Very interesting beginning. You grab the reader's attention, but I can spot at least five or six grammatical errors off the bat. Although a misplaced comma here or there doesn't make the fic a horrible read, proofreading makes your story clearer and more accessible to readers. It's got an interesting premise-who would have imagined Inuyasha falling down the well instead?-but please consider revising it.

~Critique_Mistress~

keep it up with your stories

keep it up