Reviews for Awakenings
E.Richtofen chapter 10 . 7/1/2017
I enjoyed reading every chapter, the fights were good enough for me and the dialogue was perfect in encapsulating the characters personality. Your story had a good flow to it, and I cant wait to read part 2 and 3.
QuentinTNT chapter 10 . 11/29/2015
Wonderful Story
Shinobi Gatana chapter 10 . 10/21/2015
They held back? Wow.
Shinobi Gatana chapter 9 . 10/21/2015
Kyuubi-chan? Bwahahahahaha! Awesome!
Shinobi Gatana chapter 8 . 10/21/2015
Holy sweet mother of Kishimoto-sensei! That was awesome!
Shinobi Gatana chapter 7 . 10/21/2015
Naruto is on a war path for the girl he loves. I love it!
Shinobi Gatana chapter 6 . 10/21/2015
Ah. This chapter was super sweet. And Good job on the interactions between Hinata and Sakura. :)
Shinobi Gatana chapter 5 . 10/21/2015
Poor Hinata. :(
Shinobi Gatana chapter 4 . 10/21/2015
Ut oh.
Shinobi Gatana chapter 3 . 10/20/2015
I laughed so hard at Hiashi spraying out his tea. Lol. :)
Shinobi Gatana chapter 2 . 10/20/2015
It's nice that Hinata's mom is around in this version. :)
Shinobi Gatana chapter 1 . 10/20/2015
An amazing first chapter. Well done.
wesleycharles chapter 10 . 8/9/2013
Another great fight narration here. You have presented Hinata as a sweet person but tough and skilled as a ninja, just as she is in the manga too. This is a wonderful story. I will look for the next in the series. Thanks for writing.
wesleycharles chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
This was a cool one! So appropriate and everything came together just right. A super NaruHina chapter.
wesleycharles chapter 8 . 8/9/2013
An action packed thriller of a chpt. As a Naruto fan this was super nonstop from beginning to end. I love the way it ended with Hinata catching Naruto as he fell,and also the fact that you had Naruto do the main fighting during the rescue.
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