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Learn what the enter key is supposed to be used for. Paragraph breaks man, Jesus.

Yo Wonderful story! ARe you still good? Waiting on you to complete it. You have some very original ideas.

The cheese factor in this chapter is so damn high :o

I am late to the party, but the story is captivating. PLEASE finish it. tazdad47

Even if the story isn't finished after the first half of the chapter I was looking forward to the rest... but then the other half? You must have been a child when you wrote this.

I hope you don't make the other five on par with Harry using a sword and wand. Harry is understandably good because he trained for six years with the best. The others have had a sword for a few months at most. They could easily master a few powerful spells from the books but please don't make them masters in every form of fighting ready to take on anything. Making them the same as Harry is just rediculous and unbelievable.

Interesting story. Hoping that you find your muse or inspiration for this once more :-)

You turned Harry potter into a 2010 faggot good job frosted tips wtf man have some respect for the source material

And sadly I am out. Infidelity is not okay. Having Flo cheat on her husband and him be okay with it was stupid and served no purpose to the story, neither narratively or even with smut as this is a clean fic. I was truly enjoying this story immensely as well. Assuming the author is still out there and this is read, perhaps make an Author's Note warning people that there is cheating going on in this story so they can avoid squick. You had a great idea here I am sorry I will not see the end. And to any readers who have an issue with cheating- there is cheating in this chapter!

love it! can't wait to see what happens next! hope you update soon!

Awesome fic and was a very good read.

Hi, just something I found funny. In chapter 2's AN, you said, and I quote "This is a Harry/Fleur/Hermione/Ginny pairing eventually ... And this will not be, will never be, refuses to be slash." That relationship has 3 members of the same sex in it, therefore it is slash. It's probably not what you meant, but still. Also I think your story is great.
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Good grins, but so sorry you lost your way and never continued this.

If you ever do decide to get back to this, I might suggest that you back up a chapter or two, expand on Dumbles' persecution, and use the crew's exit from Britain as the place to end this and leave any further action to a potential future sequel.

If you ever get back in the saddle and want a beta to go back through and do a bit of neatening, drop me a PM. For now, thanks for a fun read.

Fuck you