| Reviews for Betrayed |
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   evolution-500 chapter 1 . 5/22 Not a bad start, but there are some grammatical and punctuation errors here and there. |
| cerealkiller49 chapter 1 . 7/29/2014 Interesting start, I'd like to see more. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2013 Keep. It. Up. I had a good story going on about KI on Wattpad, but then it turned out bad & the project was aborted & deleted xD I AM DEPENDING ON YOU TO MAKE MORE. THIS WAS A GOOD FUCKING OPENING. THIS COULD EVEN INSPIRRRRE MEEE TO MAKE SOMETHING GUD. But I'm sticking to this for a while :3 |
| KamiDarko chapter 1 . 10/2/2008 This fanfic is indeed a sign of understanding and most asume that FULGORE was simply a mindless puppet of evil you captured the all to human side of un-saited instinct. |
| Sathlorian chapter 1 . 4/22/2006 That was cool! You must continue. Fulgore is my favorite character! |
| Fearless JoJo chapter 1 . 11/2/2005 AWESOME! Please continue. |
