Great story! You really got into his mind!

You like it I love it. Whenever I start my fic for Zuko, I think I'm going to borrow bits of the mentality you have for him. It won't be straight plagerism though and I'll give them a shout out to your story

wow... That was REALLY good...

Very nice and original. The song you chose was appropriate for the story and it was very well written. I hate Zuko's unflinching love of his father, but at the same time, I understand it. It's a disappointing trait, but it makes him a more realistic character. The joining up with the Avatar to prove a point is a different twist though that you rarely see in the oneshots of Zuko concerning his father. I wish he really had at the end of season 3, and even though he is back at his father's side, I still hope he might chose that path eventually. Great oneshot, I enjoyed reading it.

Aww... Awesome one-shot, I was actually listening to teh song while reading. It created a great effect. I know how you feel about Zuko's father, though. Sniff, how could he do such a thing? *huggles Zuko* *Zuko runs away* Aww... But I wanted to HUG youu! *Zukoauthor stare* Ok, ok. On with this review. And sorry for he momentary loss of sanity. I seem to do that a lot lately O_o

I like it how the lyrics blend in with the descriptions and the parragraphs don't follow a particular patern. Song fics usually follow a patern. I don't get it. *shurgs*But this one doesn't, so I am satisfied to have found something original, heh heh.

The ending is very surprising. I wasn't expecting that. But seriously... thinking it better, if I were Zuko, I couldn't hate him either. No mather what, family is family. Blood is thicker than water.

Well... hugs, I have to go read your other Avatar stories... if I don't fall asleep. It's 12 am here and my dad's gonna kill me, heh heh.

That was awsome, Lucibell. I'm totally hooked on your stories. This one was totally tear worthy. Seriously, it's the saddest, most beautiful thing that I've ever read. Keep up the good work!

I love that song, great song fic. so fav.

Wow you want to kill his father to. Rock on. i love Evanescence. I have the album fallen and the Anywhere but home album and DVD. The album is live in Paris and She does korn's song Thoughtless. But she doesn't say that it's Korn. She says that everyone should know that but I have like every Korn album and I just need to get See you on the other side. But you should use all the songs in the album and make it a when he joins the gang and all. Sorry for wasting your time with my constant ranting. i tent to do that frequently.

- Harlen hiesnerigh. (Sorry it's german)

Zuko: WAH! *he's balling like a baby*

Me: loved it! Wish you would update Equal soon! What is that lump thinking on Katara's neck?

later Gator!

DJ

This was great. I love Evanescence. I really really really enjoyed this. I just can't get enough of "I never can be the son you wanted" angsty fics.

i love it

Good job

THIS IS THE BEST! It is so effen' deep. OMG! If I met the real Zuko, I would show this to him. I will announce to the world about this wonderful thing you have created. OK BYE!

~kat

Oh my gosh, how sad. This fic actually matches what I think of Zuko. I once thought of writing (I still kind of am, but it‘ll be a bit different) a fic where Zuko captures Aang and brings him back to his father only to discover that he is no longer to become the next fire lord. And he is locked up because -since he’s so shocked- he just asks all these questions and keeps saying things his dad doesn’t want him to say. And soon he teams up with Sokka and Katara to help Aang.

Well, back to your story. This was just so good, and the lyrics really fit in with the story. Zuko was in character, and it felt like the truth, especially since I feel that he feels this way. I just loved this from beginning to end and will put this on my favorites list. Oh, and I can’t wait to see what you come up with next.

wow! That was beautifully written.